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Dream

Dream

A Poem by James

We all dream...

Even if we don't remember...

It still happened...

Waking from a dream...

You try to go back...

But the vision has already drifted away...

Even if you don't remember...

The vision is still there...

Concealed in your mind...

Forgotten.

© 2017 James



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I am not a poet critic
I enjoyed your poem because it reflects what we all have experienced from time to time
Captured perfectly
Nice work :)


Posted 1 Year Ago


True in most cases, yet for some reason, there are dreams that I have had since a child and never leave my mind, and I remember every little detail...yet when I get a good sleep, than I do not remember a thing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

1 Year Ago

Yeah that's the same thing that happened to me when I was younger.
Maria

1 Year Ago

Wow, really, yeah, still have no clue as to why I keep having some repetitive dreams even today
I felt a lot of tug and pull, in a good way. It's relatable, and the flow is good, which is what I like to see. Thank you for the piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

1 Year Ago

Thanks. This piece is probably one of the best I have ever written.

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