A Hole in the WallA Story by LastMonthThe destination matters. But so does the path. Not achieving the goal you set is not the same as faillure, but perhaps only an interesting twist.In the deepest of forests,
quite the greenest of greens, there was a house. A home in particular to none
at all, could this even be called a house at all..? Brick by brick, layer by layer,
cemented by others, yet none of the current inhabitants seemed to care. And as
in every house, there was many a wall, one for each angle; so it could be
considered a whole. One must not judge before it
has seen, for every little wall, has paradise waiting behind its seams. A hole
is not carved, or so they say. A hole is not created, nor can it be whisked
away. A hole is a window, meant to be, not quite for you, nor for me. It is
there out of purpose, beyond our telling, but why that is, many failed in foretelling. One such hole is where our
adventure begins, or should I say end, if you know what I mean. Many creatures are born
strong, guile and smart. Some are fast, and some love to hunt. Some have wit,
and some have flare, but this little mice, didn't seem to care. This house was
no more his then anyone else, but a share of nothing from nothing, is as equal
as it gets. Little feet were planted at the right spot, but he couldn't delay, for the sun was getting hot. Warmth was something that he normally yearned, but the light was his enemy, a hard lesson to learn. Many required the service of mice, some for company, most for a meaty slice. Preferred by many, he was as a meal, yet that didn't deter him from
trying to get his own fill. Cockroaches and larva, maggots and worms, little tiny pieces of fruit were also the norm. Yet one thing in particular he craved indeed, but to get that thing, one must perform quite a miraculous deed. Safe as he was, quite safe
and sound, outside of his hole, many awaited a mouse to hound. Vipers and
vultures, felines and badgers, they all seemed to give him a dreadful shudder. But he had seen it, not long
ago. Golden and perfect, at least that is what he saw. A wheel, almost whole,
sliced in the middle, with thick strands of yellow, poking out a little. He
knew it was there, awaiting his call, for no cat, or snake would be satisfied
with cheese as their goal. And the little mouse,
awaited and hovered, peeking from his hole, staying snugly covered. The cheese
he decided was too big to collect. He'll carry as much as he could, and
tearfully the rest he'll neglect. The timing was right, mid
day, it seemed, when all the owls and the cats were deep in their dreams. The
first step was harder, the rest came with haste, he was making his due, and he
would soon have a taste. Leaping and bouncing, from
one furniture to another, the wheel of fortune lay atop the wooden counter.
When your goal is so close, it's the hardest, they say. But no one ever
mentioned, the 'Hardest' was a big fluffy tail. Thick and brown and as brushy
as they come, it appeared that another rodent has considered this place her
home. Big eyes, nonchalant and
dreamy, she sat atop the cheese, staring him down, almost quite leery. She
would oppose him it seem, that little brown squirrel. It was her treasure, she
claimed with exasperation, and despite his pathetic bearings, he would see no
ration. Dejected and defeated, he submitted to the Squirrel. He knew that a conflict will draw unnecessarily dangers to the prowl. At the end of the day, at least he still had his hole. Guilty and bashful the Squirrel called out, ''Don't leave mister mouse, I'm sorry I was acting like a lout.'' He turned to witness her with sparkling eyes, but before he could respond, it appeared that their little gathering had attracted attention, this might end very wrong. A large serpent, green and
demanding, one bite would spell quite a horrendous ending. He started to run,
making it fast, the hole was not near, but not too far to outlast. The squirrel
was lagging behind him, as fast as she could. But there was no way that
surviving this menace she would. Bravery is not possible when
fear is brushed away, but when it freezes your veins can courage sway, and so
the mouse, little and brittle, jumped on the tail of the serpent, biting more
than a little. The snake was distraught, confused and baffled. What matter of
madness would make a mouse act like his life weren't something to laugh at? Such shock gave them the
time they required, fleeing while the snake from his ordeal recovered. Tiny
teeth, yet sharp without a doubt, they carved into his skin, it was nothing to
tut. It wasn't long before they were back in his hole, far too small so a snake
couldn't crawl. Exhausted and shocked, she eyed him with care. ''..You gave up your
cheese.'' She concluded with guilt, but he knew that something better was being
built. On that day, in the deepest of forests, a
friendship was made. One that was true, free of intents, a mouse and a
squirrel, sharing a fate. A friendship to ease on their loneliness, to banish
the sorrow. And the cheese, you ask..? They'll just get it
tomorrow.
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8 Reviews Added on May 3, 2016 Last Updated on May 15, 2016 Tags: Abandoned house, Friendship, Squirrel, Mouse AuthorLastMonthTiberias, The Southern Galil, IsraelAboutI like writing, I suppose. English is not my native tongue, I picked it up at school and mostly improved it through computers. In my early 20's and would appreciate thoughtful and impactful review.. more..Writing
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