pura poesia

pura poesia

A Poem by Lydia
"

friday night is here!

"

artwork by helene beland








i took the undulating plunge

dancing in your sunlight

swooning in your moonlight

nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky

my cohort

my co-conspirator

feeling your hopeful breath on my neck

needing that flesh on flesh

wanting to be just that little bit evil

deliciously diabolical

nothing prosaic about it,  mi amante

what it is, quite simply, is pura poesia


© 2017 Lydia



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Overall, this feels breathless & impatient, like the narrator is eager to get down to business! *wink! wink!* Your word choices are delightful, being both unusual & exact: undulating, nibbling, tumbling, deliciously diabolical . . . so much fun & action & borderline outlandishness makes this feel like wild partytime fun! Great title, too!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Margie. Yea, that's me, a wild woman....in bed by 9:30! LOL Lydi**



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Ahhh! The fall that ever echoes in the chambers of our soul. Its sweetness lingers and memory remains. Beautiful!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Even your review is poetic, Linda. Thank you so much. Lydi**
Beautiful artwork and words dear Lydia. The poem had the feel of a Donne's love poem. Filled with passion and wild desire. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

You make me feel so talented, John. thank you. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

This poem was wonderful and you are welcome dear Lydia.
Intricate and lovely like lace. Sensuous and filled with vivid images "nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky"-tantalizing and edgy!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

I appreciate your kind review. Lydi**
Oh my...here it is Tuesday morning and your Friday night write is still sizzling... nope...nothing prosaic about it..pure romance at it's best! Julie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Julie. Lydi**
Overall, this feels breathless & impatient, like the narrator is eager to get down to business! *wink! wink!* Your word choices are delightful, being both unusual & exact: undulating, nibbling, tumbling, deliciously diabolical . . . so much fun & action & borderline outlandishness makes this feel like wild partytime fun! Great title, too!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Margie. Yea, that's me, a wild woman....in bed by 9:30! LOL Lydi**
OH MY Lydi, you are a lot evil and deliciously diabolical writing this poem... fill my plate with pura poseia, with stars tumbling, and moonlight swoons... *sigh* your Friday night poems just knock me over Lydi and all I can do as I get up is whisper "nice"... when even stars and moonlight are not enough...

redzone

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Lydia

5 Months Ago

So now I have thanked you twice for this comment and it is not showing up....evil for sure!!!!
"quite simply, is pura poesia" ! And that say it all!
wonderful!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Indeed! Thank you, Angelina. Lydi**
Lyd, now on a very serious note lets have a meeting with you somewhere around this cafe and you will tell me where you get all this inspiration from.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Cassie, I am 64 years old....every day of my life is inspiration. Every person I have met, every bo.. read more
Cassie

5 Months Ago

64...wow!!! You are blessed, that's all i can think of right now, you are so blessed to be 64. God b.. read more
Lydia

5 Months Ago

I hope so too! :)
dear Lydi, your poetry and art is surely a Cameo of romantic persuasion of your presence in Portugal. I feel as though I have been on a flight of fancy and seduction. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

So pleased you enjoyed it, Pat. Thank you very much for the review. Lydi**
Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

A lovely overture of butterfly wings... in colors of passion...
truly, Pat
Panache and passion in pure poetic form, it doesn't get any better than this, beautifully scribed Lydia with endearing style!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Tom. Lydi**

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