pura poesia

friday night is here!

artwork by helene beland

i took the undulating plunge

dancing in your sunlight

swooning in your moonlight

nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky

my cohort

my co-conspirator

feeling your hopeful breath on my neck

needing that flesh on flesh

wanting to be just that little bit evil

deliciously diabolical

nothing prosaic about it,  mi amante

what it is, quite simply, is pura poesia

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Overall, this feels breathless & impatient, like the narrator is eager to get down to business! *wink! wink!* Your word choices are delightful, being both unusual & exact: undulating, nibbling, tumbling, deliciously diabolical . . . so much fun & action & borderline outlandishness makes this feel like wild partytime fun! Great title, too!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Margie. Yea, that's me, a wild woman....in bed by 9:30! LOL Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi... it has been three years since you made
your debut with this sensuous poem. Many a Pearl has
been discovered... but even now you have that essence of
discretion and gathering the beauty of the Sea.. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

How wonderful you went three years back to find this one, Pat. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Ahhh! The fall that ever echoes in the chambers of our soul. Its sweetness lingers and memory remains. Beautiful!

[Lydia Shutter]

Even your review is poetic, Linda. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and words dear Lydia. The poem had the feel of a Donne's love poem. Filled with passion and wild desire. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

You make me feel so talented, John. thank you. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

This poem was wonderful and you are welcome dear Lydia.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Intricate and lovely like lace. Sensuous and filled with vivid images "nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky"-tantalizing and edgy!

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your kind review. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Oh my...here it is Tuesday morning and your Friday night write is still sizzling... nope...nothing prosaic about it..pure romance at it's best! Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Julie. Lydi**

[redzone]

OH MY Lydi, you are a lot evil and deliciously diabolical writing this poem... fill my plate with pura poseia, with stars tumbling, and moonlight swoons... *sigh* your Friday night poems just knock me over Lydi and all I can do as I get up is whisper "nice"... when even stars and moonlight are not enough...

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

[Lydia Shutter]

[Lydia Shutter]

So now I have thanked you twice for this comment and it is not showing up....evil for sure!!!!

[angelina neves]

"quite simply, is pura poesia" ! And that say it all!
wonderful!

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed! Thank you, Angelina. Lydi**

[Cassie]

Lyd, now on a very serious note lets have a meeting with you somewhere around this cafe and you will tell me where you get all this inspiration from.

[Lydia Shutter]

Cassie, I am 64 years old....every day of my life is inspiration. Every person I have met, every book I have read, every scene I have witnessed. I so appreciate your wonderful review. Lydi**

[Cassie]

64...wow!!! You are blessed, that's all i can think of right now, you are so blessed to be 64. God bless you with long long life my dear friend. I really love reading you and i hope to read you for a long long long time

[Lydia Shutter]

I hope so too! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, your poetry and art is surely a Cameo of romantic persuasion of your presence in Portugal. I feel as though I have been on a flight of fancy and seduction. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

So pleased you enjoyed it, Pat. Thank you very much for the review. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

A lovely overture of butterfly wings... in colors of passion...
truly, Pat