My dearest muse

My dearest muse

A Chapter by Moonie
"

~suffering from a writer's block~

"
My muse is sleeping,
oh wake up, dear sweet heart.
You have missed so much.
So much has happened. 
Your sleepy little blonde head
needs to rise and shine.
Now blink open your amber eyes,
startled by the sudden light,
catch the flaxen strands that
have escaped and tie them neatly.
Wake up, dearest fair friend, 
no prince is coming,
it's only me....
with a saucepan in hand!


© 2018 Moonie


Author's Note

Moonie
~been suffering from a writer's block~

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Though tragic to the writer, you found a way to make me smile at the horror of a muse in silence. How I hope the feast in the saucepan brought more words than a poetic soul could dream of. Let the muse flow in the fragrance of every scent around you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your reviews!! I apologise that I have not been able to reply or reciprocate.... read more
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Ah, I am only grateful that you are still here, and hoping that your moonlit world is keeping you fu.. read more



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Though tragic to the writer, you found a way to make me smile at the horror of a muse in silence. How I hope the feast in the saucepan brought more words than a poetic soul could dream of. Let the muse flow in the fragrance of every scent around you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your reviews!! I apologise that I have not been able to reply or reciprocate.... read more
An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Ah, I am only grateful that you are still here, and hoping that your moonlit world is keeping you fu.. read more
I enjoyed reading this! A very constructive way of dealing with writer's block :)
Simple, straight forward with lovely images springing into my head :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


A enjoyable read with a good ending. I liked the muse that needed milk. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think I need to shout this one out to my own Muse, who has been quite lazy of late herself. You wrote your way into awakening admirably!

Posted 9 Years Ago


haha with a saucepan in hand!! are you going to smash it on the head to teach it a lesson? that's what saucepans are for, right?
I hope your technique worked. been there myself. nice poem, anyway.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Writers block gets the best of us, but I think this is a cool little poem. Enjoy the use or colors in your imagery, brings it to life

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such a nice and lovely way to call upon our dearest muse. I'm praying for it to visit me more often, too. Loved this writing quite much. Congrats!

Posted 9 Years Ago


HAHA! The ending...😂😂💕💕
I love you,Moon's Fairest Daughter 💖

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh, the malevolent beast known as writer’s block, how many times have we battle, and slain the cunning creature, only to have it rise from the dead, like Romero’s Zombies, and attack with even more viciousness, ruthless in its approach. I’ve been there, join the club, we have jackets! I recently listen to an author (sorry, the name escapes me at the moment) but he uses a technique of reversal; think of a person’s career, or type and reverse what you know about them . . . e.g. a list of three, a mechanic, what does a mechanic do? Fixes cars, reverse it, what’s a mechanic that doesn’t work on cars do? A restaurant, what do restaurants do? They serve people? What if they didn’t serve people? A police officer, what do police officers do? Protect and server. What if said officer didn’t protect and serve. These are just examples. There’s also the title game, write titles, then think what goes with those titles; rearrange metaphors, or (and I’ve done this) write a letter to writer’s block, (or in your case, write a poem to it.

I hope this helps some


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jack Wolfe

9 Years Ago

Cooking shows? Hmm . . . that is definitely a first, interesting, but I suppose it beats the British.. read more
Moonie

9 Years Ago

Did that actually work?
Jack Wolfe

9 Years Ago

I don't know he claimed it did. Not sure of the author's name, I read it a long time ago in an inter.. read more
A nice rhapsody. with writer's block I highly relate to it. I amazing that even in a block you pen such a beautiful string of words!
Thumbs up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moonie

9 Years Ago

Oh, you are very kind, madam! :))

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