The River

The River

A Poem by Neetha
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Nature's Wonder...

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                                           Rising from the hills

                                           Gurgling down the slopes

                                           Rumbling through the meadows

                                           The River flows.


 

                                           Clear as a crystal

                                           Sparkling like a diamond

                                          Great as a goddess 

                                          The River flows.


 

                                          Humming tunes sweet

                                         Caressing over pebbles

                                         Rejuvenating precious lives

                                         The River flows.


© 2017 Neetha



Author's Note

Neetha
Rivers protect, enchant, nurture...
But these days they are mercilessly polluted.
People ought to protect them.
If the present state continues, humanity will live dead!
So, gear up to protect our lifelines!

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My favorite stanza was definitely the first one. There was something magical about it. The rest was okay but the rhyme scheme was lost...

Thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


emipoemi

5 Months Ago

I second this review. Took the words right out of my mouth. However, it wasn't the rhyme scheme that.. read more
Jessica Lima

5 Months Ago

YESSSS! I second your comment too!
Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thanks for the suggestions.:)
Beautiful and graceful poem, like the river described. "Humming tunes sweet..caressing over pebbles"-lovely and powerful. Love this!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much ☺
I am glad you enjoyed!
A beautiful poem. I loved the description of the river. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

I am so happy to read your words:)
Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Neetha.
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Sky
Such a beautiful and captivating prose. I loved this one and the Author's note is really nice. Great work friend :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much:)
I am glad you enjoyed!
Sky

5 Months Ago

Your most welcome :)
I loved your description, nice one.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Rassoul:)
Beautifully written..amazing

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much:)
Glad you enjoyed!
I guess this kind of productive write can open the eyes of authorities and citizens to have a deep understanding what steps to be taken to prevent it..the massive message has been shared by this shorter piece of writing... quite impressive :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Abhishek:)
I am humbled by your review!
this is beautiful!! i love it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much:)
Glad you enjoyed!
The descriptions, the beauty and the ability to visualize are all there!
The poem's repetition helped enhance the poem and made it engaging for the readers!
Keep it up

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Shaan:)
Glad you enjoyed!
From the repeated syllable rhymes, along with same letter use... Succinct and crystal-clear wordage... You made me feel the river, rather than just see it... Smoothly penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Silente:)
Always happy to read your review!
Silente

5 Months Ago

Keep up the rejuvenation of spirit...!

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Added on May 26, 2017
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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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