Red Rose

Blood red it was

The Red Rose

 

Beautiful it was

The Red Rose

 

Alluring it was

The Red Rose

 

Blood stained it was

My Red Rose.

Author's Note

My sadness, My feelings- My Red Rose

Reviews

[wordman]

such a tragedy,a beautiful rose turned deadly

[Sofia]

Such a beautiful one..it's been long since I read any of your lovely poems...I loved this..the way you compared the red rose with your sadness is so amazing..but why's my sissy sad? She should always smile😊
Keep smiling siso and whenever you're sad you can message me... I'll make sure my sissy always smiles 💜

[Zephyr]

You are so lovely Sofia:)
I am glad and teary eyed to read your words dear.
Its just that if I am feeling down, emotions come out as poems. haha..
You can always write to me an I will too dear.
I will write when I am free because II wanna fully indulge in it and not be disturbed by exams and stuff!
Love you Loads:)

[Sofia]

I'm so lucky I've got a sis like you :)
I'm moved by your words too... I missed you badly when I was busy and instead my cousin sis managed this account...waiting eagerly for ur msg.. you're so sweet..love u to the moon and back 💜

[Zephyr]

All the same here lovely sis:)

[Damien Ridge]

You've managed to capture true sadness with such few words... 9 words I think... Didn't check it or anything, but that takes talent. Thanks for sharing!

[Zephyr]

Haha...
Thank you so much Damien:)
Glad to read your words!!

[Mr.Writer]

I could feel the pain and sadness in the poem...
I actually felt many different emotions, all in one poem..
Well done Neetha, keep it up!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Shaan:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)