Musical Whispers

Sweet sweet music ...........

Musical Whispers

An endearing yielding melody

Beats within my wanting heart

Tuned deftly by skilled aficionado’s

Wondrously soft musical whispers

A sweet manuscript uniquely serene

As a mountain’s fresh flowing stream

Solo formed masterpiece of adulation

Refrain composing spoken words of love

Adagio in tempo to savour every note

Holding mutual action pitch in unison

Our nocturne builds to fermata bliss

And solidly plucks magnificently the cords

Rhythmically on rose petal linen sheets

Tremolo repeats in burning energico

Until crescendo reaches highest peek

Thus completely duet’s destined harmony

Our coda brings conclusion to the song

A final passage carefully choreographed

Where remains our echoing afterthoughts

Reciprocated recital revelling nothing else

Phillozofee @ 2017

Reviews

[lightsong]

So so very beautiful, with magic through Your words into the air, I love music, I believe in it, I believe in its power, not just one type of power, music for me is timeless... Your words I understand and feel, the way these whispers affect us deeply, touch us, caress us... in places, urging our unspoken words to float, emotions... some of Your lines really hit me because they spoke better than I could, the ending was amazing, great piece, thank You for sharing, and Happy Musical Sunday :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your kind review ... I'm whistling a happy tune!

[lightsong]

🎶🎶🎶🎶🎶

[barleygirl]

Excellent tapestry of musical terminology & the vivid details of loving longing. Your word play is very apparent, both playful & serious at the same time. Your word choices are melodic in sound with many "m" sounds that make it feel like moans of longing. I wonder if you meant to use the word "chords" (last line of 3rd stanza)?

[augustus]

Thoroughly enjoyable. Music to relish and linger in the memory.

[ROXANE DORSEY]

One word sums this poem up for me, great. thanks for sharing.

[Ayushi Jha]

BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

[Priyanshi]

Magical words flowing in the poem.
I enjoyed it.

[Stella Armour]

A melody fulfilled, from a gentle air through to faster beats and final crescendo... then afterglow of love.
Some beautifully written lines and painted images here Phill, all tenderly and sensuously perfected...

one for my library..:)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

I thank you very much ...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Ok ..had to look up a few words.
BUT now I know !
Soft-Beautiful-Melodious tones..

Did Enjoy..

Jazzy

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your review - very appreciated - so happy you enjoyed the write.

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome !! ............................:).........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

musically physical...the notes to match the soft touches to skin and heart...

reminds me of a scene in Eddie and the Cruisers 2---the sax player on the side of the mountain belting out a mournful, haunting tune---
reaching for the song...for each other.
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Jacob for the great review - looked up the sax player and found that around forty years ago, Dartmouth’s Mike “Tunes” Antunes began playing saxophone for the Rhode Island band Beaver Brown. The second-generation American with a Cape Verdean heritage rode a wave of success that included world tours and a pair of number-one songs. With the release of the movie soundtrack for the feature film “Eddie and the Cruisers” in 1983, Antunes’ talent was heard on radios across the nation and seen on MTV and HBO. To add to his accomplishments, Antunes also played a role in the film. John Cafferty & The Beaver Brown Band found themselves at the top of the charts alongside acts such as U2 and Sting. Gonna look out for some tunes on Youtube ... :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Poetry? Music? Ahhhhhh- both! Superb pan-artistic composition...brilliant metaphor-Melody of consummated love...harmony of love shared. Great!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for 'tuning in' to my latest - and - your wonderful review! :-)