Widen Your Smile

Today you are feeling sad and stressed.
Feels like to apart from this world.
But you have no idea that  behind you,
What's going on?
Your mom awaiting to see that smile again.
Sister is desiring to bring that  smile again to your lips.
Brother recalls past happy memories
and dad finding the reason what did hit you?
And you just lost in your world,
Totally depressed and hurt.
So just
stand up and call up your memories,
remember those people, who wanna
see you smile again,
at least smile for them, please
It's a request...... SMILE AGAIN
and bring COLORS to your life.
Don't think everything has vanished
and destroyed.
Think, an opportunity is waiting for you,
SO, Go and GRAB it and.....
WIDEN YOUR SMILE

Author's Note

True emotions of mine that I penned it here....felt for one of my best friend.

Reviews

[Pravir]

I dont know about others . . . but the last line really brought a smile on my face . . . truely motivating . . . veryyy simply written . . . i love this kind of writes where the deep emotions are described by such simple words . . . nice work priyanshi . . loved to read

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lot....thanks a lot, friend.

[Kesha]

What an uplifting poem! I sincerely enjoyed this, it made me smile :P wonderfully penned friend!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, dear....I'm really too glad for your kind visit and review...that meants a lot to me.

[Kesha]

You are very welcome :)

[wordman]

depression is a real disease that a lot of people do not see

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, I agree with your words...Thank you so much, friend, am really glad for your kind visit and review.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Mamta Sonowal]

This is such an amazing poem. After read this poem I feel happy from home inside and this poem indicate a message to all of us we youngster totally busy in our world which is jst a fake world which only gives us only pain that we always need to talk with our family members and always bring a smile with them...

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, you're right, dear....thank you so much, Mamta....thanks once again for your kind review..

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur most welc'me... I jst loved it. It is very good poem actually that u wrote... Keep it up...

[Nightblood]

i'm smiling,uplifting read,nice one

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend.

[Zephyr]

Your poem is really positive:)
There are people who love us when we think we are all alone. They deserve a smile:)
Keep writing dear!

[Priyanshi]

I'm really happy for your kind review and visit, thank you so much...Neetha.

[Zephyr]

Always a pleasure:)

[Dreambound]

I love this, I am going through hell at the moment and this made me smile.
I hope to smile again like you say, through the pain and look forward to future circumstance.
I hope your friend is okay now, beautiful words.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you ,friend so much......really, I'm glad that this poem made you smile.....Thanks, once again for your kind review and visit.

[Sapientiam]

We often indulge so much in our despair that we fail to recognize those we are hurting in the process. People should smile as you say, not a fake smile to satisfy others, but a sincere one that gives you more hope. Smiling even in your darkest hours can make the most difference. It's okay to not be okay, but as you say here, it is essential to look beyond the current circumstances and grab the future. Thank you for sharing this hopeful poem!

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, totally agree with your views...Thank you so much, Sapientiam......that was my motive behind this written.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

priyanshi....i don't know why but, i felt good after reading this....i really needed a write like this...i needed some hope!....and today, after a tornado i feel lyk giving an end to my happiness but, i feel the world has started holding hands together to make each other happy!....thanks for sharing..thank you

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so so so much.....reading your review, I felt so so so happy, I'm glad that you liked it, Wajiha...thanks dear, again.

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautifully written.....I really loved this one...

[Priyanshi]

Hey, glad to know that you loved it, Najam.
Thank you so much, dear.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)