A Day at the Beach

senryu

A day at the beach

should've tied those strings tighter

bikini mishap

Author's Note

No, this did not happen to me. But it does happen to some... ;)

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

Oooops! Hehe very funny :)

[Rita L. Sev]

;) Thank you!

[Samuel Dickens]

And where was I? Probably watching the old woman who was having trouble with her folding chair. Darnit!

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, the old woman may be interesting, but I'm sure not nearly as entertaining... ;)

[Holly Mason]

that is not what you tube is claimin' hhahhha
quite clever and fun...just like you*)
thank you teach for sharing...you should be getting paid for that video *)hahah

[Rita L. Sev]

Haha! Thanks, Holly... shhh about that youtube vid! ;)

[rhythm&blues]

Like your disclaimer, it does happen, more often than we think.

[Rita L. Sev]

Yes, this time of year, be sure to tie those strings tightly! :) LOL!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that sounds like a kodak moment to me... that is why I always have my cell phone camera ready.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Men... always looking for that glimpse... ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Guilty as charged :)

[Clockwork]

A very appropriate senryu for this time of year. I talked to my sister earlier today about going to the beach and you brought a slice of it right to my desk. I've always wondered how those types of mishaps don't happen more often with how some of those strings are...and as Marie said, maybe its not always an accident. Good one here!

[Rita L. Sev]

Thank you, C! Yes, those tops and strings are a mystery... ;)

[Marie]

It might not have been an accident.

[Rita L. Sev]

Oh, what a naughty thought... ;) Thanks!

[Ed Hart]

well good, some positive things to imagine this morning

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! Glad to get your day started right. Thank you, Ed!

[SteveB]

Well done! I shamefacedly must admit that we used to look forward to such mishaps. Well constructed senryu with your usual wit and humor.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I'm sure you did... Thanks, Steve!