Under The Rose Trellis

Under The Rose Trellis

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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Choka, the longest of Japanese Haiku type poem...

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                             Running Pale Pink Rose

                       On the trellis grows_soft scent

                             Wafts on morning air

                   

                               Under rose trellis

                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful

                            Lips that taste of rose

 


© 2011 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick



Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Choka, written in response to competition that said leave me breathless..

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There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Soooo beautiful and romantic....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is gorgeous and I hadn't heard of Choka before so I not only was afforded the opportunity to read something so wonderful, I also learned something new.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Full poem, it will make button snaps, pop!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a soft romantic write this is. Wonderful imagery and great form too. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. I also learned from this. What I only know is haiku and senryu. I have done a poem consisting of 3 haikus...so it's a Choka.
Thanks for the share.

Posted 4 Years Ago


There is something special about a rose, a kiss, and a poem...
They are all rather "minuscule" in the grand scheme of things. Yet, they all have the power to change this world into a better place...
Much like you Sara as an author... Making the world a better place.
Lovely!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ha This made me smile. It's beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ohhhh yes!!! Sublime, divine and smiling here, re-read with pleasure xx

Posted 4 Years Ago


Such few words and says so much...nicely penned...SyberRose

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review...Sara
Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

4 Years Ago

Thanks, David, for your kind review...Sara
there are times I'd say poetry is art and this is one of them.
Nice work.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on May 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 19, 2011
Tags: Choka, love, nature, take your breath away
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