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Doll

Doll

A Poem by Shasha
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We often loose those little shining pearls in the deepness of the ocean of life.

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I regret my mistake doll
As the time aged
I forgot your rosy smile
Which once took all my frivolous tears.
But look doll, Now I am back to you
With the same old tears
But this time, deeper then an ocean
Because today, though they are mine
But are scratching your cheeks...

© 2017 Shasha



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Shasha
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Lovely, self reflection over the years can be a good thing and the things we once depended on can years later show us how much we have grown both as a person and our perception on life...loved this :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


I think it was great... That sudden twist on the end, in my opinion, really made me go back and attempt a better connection with the poem... So... Well penned...

Posted 9 Months Ago


Shasha

9 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!!!
Silente

9 Months Ago

A pleasure
I liked the poem. I had to read twice. I liked how you used the doll. Making the reader understand the journey. A very good closing to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shasha

10 Months Ago

Thank you very much Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome Shasha.
It's nyc actually keep it up. 😅

Posted 10 Months Ago


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We unknowingly express our anger and pain on materials like a doll.
"But this time, deeper then an ocean"
Very well written, Shasha :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shasha

10 Months Ago

Thank you Tazeen!
Like I earlier said Shasha, the last two lines are the most beautiful ones!
Keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


Shasha

10 Months Ago

Thank you Soumya!

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Added on September 26, 2017
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Tags: Childhood, memories, doll, love, bound

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Shasha

Where there are many voices but one sound, the country of love, India



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