Violet Field

Violet Field

A Poem by Silmara McGarry

 


As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.


Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honor of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.


© 2017 Silmara McGarry



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Soft and hopeful thoughts for love.
"Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine since the beginning of our lives."
I liked the above lines. When we welcome love. Love can come. Thank you Silmara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

I am indeed glad you enjoy it :-) Thank you so much for reading it and your kind lovely words. See y.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome Silmara.



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a beautiful love poem,great image

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

Thank you indeed :-)
The imagery here is stunning, the violet fields a passageway to the deeper places, the magic places. This is a wondrous longing cry of the soul for that golden thread that weaves two souls into one. Wondrous!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Yes...the magic places!
Thanks indeed for your superb and so well put review.
Have a .. read more
I love purple and this poem made me love it much more than before. :) Subtle feelings expressed theough the image of the purple field. Great job

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

I am so glad the wonderful purple colour and subtle feelings of the words uplifted you. Thank so ver.. read more
This conveys a time shared and enjoyed...
love the picture, too.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Josie!
All best,
:-)
Sil
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Sky
I see the perfection in your words and loyalty in your heart for love. True love really seems like the two hearts are connected since the beginning of lives. Simply Awesome Poem :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

9 Months Ago

First, I must apologise for missing your review.
I definitely agree with you!
Thank .. read more
Sky

9 Months Ago

It's okay. Your welcome :)
I like the way this starts out a little bland & then amplifies as it goes along, until the ending seems to have much more of a powerful message to convey. The first couplet seems bland to me becuz some of the ideas are a little predictable: ""walk down the road" . . . "breathe in the air" . . . "heart beats perfectly with you." This could be spiced up a bit by SHOWING us what the road looks like or what the air smells like or what the heartbeats feels like . . . details make a message more original & memorable. The final paragraph/stanza builds into a crescendo of hope & optimism.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciated ;-)
I like this, you have captured a feeling and converted a mood into a colour

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Many thanks indeed for reading and your kind review.

All best...Sil :-)
Oh be still my beating heart! This is so beautiful and romantic. I love all of it and purple being my fave, I love it even more! ~Shron

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

I love your reviews, Miss Sharon! You always give me the biggest smile :-)
Thanks a million.. read more
Miss Sharon

8 Months Ago

I love to see you smile my dear friend! May your days be billed with much about which to smile. ~Sha.. read more
Silmara McGarry

8 Months Ago

Thank you so very much!!! And yours also :-) :-) :-)
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B.J
Such a pleasant messagw for a greating card. The last stanza is heartfelt tenderness

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Thanks indeed for reading and you lovely review :-)

All the very best,

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B.J

1 Year Ago

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
So hopeful, I enjoyed this write.
You write very nicely

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

1 Year Ago

Many thanks indeed, dear for your lovely review ;-)

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Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

May we find our souls floating in the peaceful waters of it's original place. SM, United Kingdom



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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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