Forgetting

change of emotions and for all those who feel the same

I've tried so hard
But I haven't got very far
It's been months since you let me down
Realizing it now, makes me feel like a clown
It's been a while since you've been around
A free fall cliff all the way down
Now where are you?
F*****g God knows who
But my journey continues
Time to start forgetting you

I'm down but not out
I'm trying to be a man and not pout
Read these words and know them well
Words can't express how far I fell
Thinking of you makes me queasy
But who said this was going to be easy
I know there are more fish in the sea
I know there are more possibilities than just you and me
And my journey continues
I'm starting to forget you

Reviews

[Jazique]

Great job "Forgetting" nice work with the ending "I'm staring to forget you," it when you have to start when it time to Forget. Way to go with similes and all.

[SilentDreamer]

Again great job. I like the end " I'm starting to forget you"

[Revolved]

This is great but I just think the F-Bomb shouldn't be right next to the word God... Sorry I'm just a bit irritated about that since I'm a Christian... Just saying what's on my mind! This is an awesome poem! Keep it up!! :D

[R.C.A.]

this was really awesome...just maybe you can add some punctuation even if it is just one or two periods. I love the abstract feeling and the images were concrete. To improve it maybe you can add some more details with the senses like touch, smell, taste, etc.

[OkieWonKenokie]

I love this. I have the same feeling. On like the 15th line:

"Thinking of you makes my queasy."

shouldn't it be

"Thinking of you makes me queasy."?

prolly just one of those accident errors but great write. Love it though.