a beautiful New Year

a beautiful New Year

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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ahh I can be a sap every once in a while

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She dances in confetti
ringing in the new
year in our chilly
living room
sparkling eyes
under the Christmas tree
Her sister smiles
and yawns they
finally made it
together.
Clasp hands and
run to the hill
smiling runny noses
my little one spits
just like me.
It makes me laugh
Not exactly lady
like you see.
Flying down the bumps
screams of terror
and delight
till exhausted we
collapse in our hot
chocolate -
It's a brand new day
a new year
our way.




© 2016 Lyn Anderson



Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
I don't know why I did it. The capitals and non capitals worked for me this way

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you write good "sappy" KL, and with kids laughter wrapped in the middle... can't think of a better way to bring in the new year...

redzone

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

I did really like this one.
"till exhausted we
collapse in our hot
chocolate" what a great image that conjures for me. One of familial love and making memories. These are the times we remember when we are old. Watching children do every day things like holding hands, giggling, and running.....and then coming back inside to the place they call home. Heavy sigh! So lovely. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

thank you so much. this one was just a little light in the dark I tend to wallow in my writing. I re.. read more
It works, it works well. Hey, if it made me smile like this, yeah it works... N

Posted 3 Years Ago


I remember the thrill of sledding and the taste of hot chocolate afterward. Hot chocolate never tasted so good. I enjoyed the upbeat poem and the structure reminded me of a sled run. ; )

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by
Well what do you know, you have a cute and cuddly side who wouda thunk it?Go ahead correct my speeling you know you wanna lol.This poem is lovely,happy New Year:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

I wouldn't dream of correcting your SPELLING lol. And yes, I can be squishy every once in a while.
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

HAHA Indeed. Well good for you and squishy :)
Very nice poetry, very cute. Happy New Year and have a great one! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you for dropping by.:)
A nice depiction of seeing in the New Year KLG style

Posted 3 Years Ago


Awesome delight to muse the day:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

too kind. Thank see ye
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3 Years Ago

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Lyn Anderson
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