Reality

Reality

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Just some stuff I wrote and decided to share since it's been forever!

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I try to pick up the pieces of my shattered heart left crumbled on the ground but defeat starts to set into my mind. Emptiness is a feeling all too familiar as I lay here and contemplate what the rest of my life without love would feel like. Nearly two years have passed and women come and go... not one has chosen to stay and accept the love I have to give. On the other hand, maybe they see that this heart is empty and while I lay here believing in what I have to offer, the women of the past see that there's nothing left. No love, no compassion and no reason to love me. I lay alone without a tear in my eye, without an ache in my heart. Yet, I caress a crack in my soul as the pain and hurt from life without love is beyond affecting the body I reside in. It's much deeper than that now. It's taking a slow, torturing toll on my soul that will last eternity. An emptiness and loneliness that bruises the very thought of my own existence to a point of feeling completely gone from life as we know. Yet, I stop to think that it's still just me laying alone in this bed. At least I have me.



© 2016 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
Doesn't really fit a category but I have all these things I've written and haven't shared... decided to share this piece that I wrote in bed last night.

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An interesting write caught between an itch you cannot scratch, a hunger that won't go away and maybe just maybe,slow down and let love come to you, its all about being out there socially and something happens when you least expect it. apart from that i feel your pain. Hi Aaron hope all is well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

are you mocking my reviews kwp.:)
KWP

1 Year Ago

no way ... I was just hoping for a full meal ... LOVE X
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

It definitely does have a way of creeping up on you when you least expect it! I blame it on the col.. read more



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ahhhh ... you know I have a lot of friends in this situation, it's just something I have never expereinced myself so what to say? what to offer?

I thnk sometimes the universe wants us to get a start on our own, you know learn to be comfortable with oneself, like totally alone and in love with self first before any other ... also there is a lesson in patience too i guess, ah, we all have our little lessons in life....

yes I would say, learn to fully appreciate yourself in every single way, love yourself and then open your heart to the universe, smile and mean it, let the love out just becuase you can, not because you need to ... then see what happens, it does take time though ... thats the patience bit :)

hey you nice to see you XX

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

It's funny the way things work. I have been perfectly fine and happy just living life and experienc.. read more
KWP

1 Year Ago

I think the cold can definitely change one's mood - in England they call it Sad Disease ... for the .. read more
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

I love the advice my friend... thank you so much :)
An interesting write caught between an itch you cannot scratch, a hunger that won't go away and maybe just maybe,slow down and let love come to you, its all about being out there socially and something happens when you least expect it. apart from that i feel your pain. Hi Aaron hope all is well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

are you mocking my reviews kwp.:)
KWP

1 Year Ago

no way ... I was just hoping for a full meal ... LOVE X
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

It definitely does have a way of creeping up on you when you least expect it! I blame it on the col.. read more

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I love to write, most my work tends to be on the darker side. I write from my heart and tend not to mess with it too much. I guess sometimes I write and post without focusing on what everyone else w.. more..

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