Falling Down with the Fall

Fall, I was falling down, along with the falling leaves. Everything was falling… Everyone is falling…

 

Walking under the fall, with leaves, lonely and slowly falling down, tears streamed down. I blinked hard, trying to control my tears, but… I couldn’t. Fall, everything around me was falling; there were no more lives with happy faces…

 

The Earth was dead, no more hope, no more light. Human chose to abandon this Earth, they dumped it. Throwing rubbishes everywhere, they dumped this Earth, they did, I saw it, I saw this Earth dying.

 

Human had gone away from earth one by one without any tears, without any loving to this Earth. They chopped down every tree, everything green, there was only one place. One place which human hadn’t destroyed. It was here, where the last ten precious trees were planted.

 

I had planted them my own. With my very own hands while I was crying. My tears were the only way to give them nutrition; the water was all burned out at Earth.

 

Earth was destroyed, completely, by its owners hand, the endless destroying by throwing rubbishes, polluting it with oil and co2. Conclusion, destroyed

 

The human deserved this, but the green didn’t, they were innocence, they were here to help.. but now… human destroyed it, all…

 

Along with the fall, while I was falling, everything, everyone was falling. I Fell.

Author's Note

What do you think? You got to tell me, I am new in this topic :(

Reviews

[4$H]

Amazing motive and skillfully executed *_*

[Enigmatic Amor]

Nice topic. I think this could be a new genre. Environmental writing.

[akapr17other]

I'm disappointed in myself for taking so long to finally read this. I really really liked it. Great job.

[Sunflower 20]

this is a really heartfelt story and it relates really well to what Humans are doing now, with Global warming and everything. But i think it needs to be edited a bit, because i found quite a few spelling mistakes.
However, the message is very clearly displayed through wonderful imagery, well done :)

[Loner]

A really thought provoking piece , very well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

The story may be true in about 50 years. Acid rain is spreading everywhere. Nothing is safe. I like the story. Need more people with concern for the forest, water and air. I believe would be a good story. I look forward to reading more.
Coyote

[hannajade]

This is a depressing topic that HAS to be addressed--which is what I plan to do for my career, help environment and animals.
Thanks for writing this!

[OT]

oh yes!!! nice! I have to agree with the others this is one of your strongest writes!! a great imagery - a sad tale, but well written!

[Akshat♥]

so sad to hear about it..
this is our earth..we have to take care of it..
not polluting,use of plastic,cutting of trees etc..
i like the way you make one feel that you should plant new trees..
greenery is so nice to see...help earth..nice write:)

[Marie Harrison]

So sad. I don't know what I would do without Fall foilage time or trees in my life. This really made me sad your story. Well written.