The strings we share

We are hanging, dangling 

From a string

Weaving as we walk

We unravel ourselves , Entangling

 Intertwined with the string

We pull in

Pieces

 Insecurities 

Dangle

They all dangle

Enraptured

Drawn in

Hanging

All hanging

We all  look and see ?

Glass eyes clouded 

We all hear?

 We all feel ?

Walls in our minds

We all think and be ?

were we ever who we wanted to be ?

in this sick twisted reality

or did the strings pull us back in

tugging'

tugging at the pieces

until we all fell apart

broken

enraptured and entangled by the strings we share. 

Reviews

[Nemophilist Meraki]

..... I don't even know what to say. There are only so many times you can tell someone how amazing their writing is.

The separation of stanzas at the end is incredible!!! The spacing you use, varying the number of lines, give so much meaning to what you're saying. It makes it feel like we're right there, in your thoughts, as they break at the points thoughts would break. Or right there, as the strings, tugging and spinning and twisting and breaking apart again.

Just as a personal interest.. would you mind writing what inspires each poem as an author's note. I would really love to know what encourages you to write and what you're feeling or thinking or whatever that brought each poem into existence. :)

Thank you for sharing
.meraki.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Yeah sure sounds fun i might do that from now on thanks for the idea. Thank you as always for your insightful feedback and enthusiasm i'm glad people can connect to me as a person that means alot. i am sorry for the late comments i was away for almost two weeks

[T. Edana Talbott]

This is hauntingly AWESOME. Something about the way you've woven this gives me a spooky, eerie tingle up my spine haha. So creative

[TheAimlessWanderer]

THANK YOU SO MUCH THAT MEANS ALOT COMING FROM YOU !!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

got a little over excited still really from that breathtaking poem of yours

[T. Edana Talbott]

Haha awww, I'm so flattered. Your writing moves me, I'm glad mine could touch you as well

[TheAimlessWanderer]

are you trying to give me a coma
almost passed out hearing that
feel free to send me any read request
anytime

[T. Edana Talbott]

The same goes for you! haha, It would be my pleasure to read anything of yours

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i will for sure do that NEED AN IV STAT "he's flat lining" ......

[Nisreen]

I like the use of a string to describe how our vary being just tangles up more than often

its a very creative piece

[TheAimlessWanderer]

thank you very much glad you enjoyed it !!

[Rvie]

I like how you play with words. How you created such meaningful work out of it. Thumbs Up! ^_^

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you so much glad you enjoyed it it means a lot to me personally as a writer when some when says it is meaningful to them.