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Justice in seeing

Justice in seeing

A Poem by TheAimlessWanderer
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tried something new

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In thine eyes i breathe sun,  pure ever so radiant 

a warm glow contained in knowing 

for in thine eyes but a respite 

for a weary heart

peace lies in  words of belief

and truth lies at the hearts of the words within

and so justice in seeing


in thine eyes..

© 2016 TheAimlessWanderer


Author's Note

TheAimlessWanderer
going to try to write more often feeling great lately so they are most likely going to be very upbeat

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A beautifully expressed poem. . . :)
From the way I interpreted it (though I'm not sure if I'm right), this poems speaks of the peace, fulfillment, and happiness of being loved in return. And I wold agree. That feeling's on of the most uplifting feelings one could perceive.
That's how I saw it. :) But it would be kind of you to tell its true meaning.
Thanks for inviting me to read! :) I'm glad you are also finding other types of feelings to convey through your poems.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

you are indeed right in that interpretation but that is only part of it i was also speaking about ho.. read more
thaleeyaLuna

3 Years Ago

Don't worry, you explained it well. That was very nice indeed. :)



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In my head, this poem feels so relaxed, and calm. It feels full of a content kind of happiness. It's awesome to see you writing with new emotions in your poems! It shows that regardless of what you're feeling you are magnificent at expressing it. :)
Especially an idea as delicate as perspective. I find it's a very gentle subject that requires a lot of skill to express properly, considering it changes with each and every person. But you did a beautiful job.
Thank you for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I;m so happy you're feeling well! Can't wait to read more lovely pieces from you!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

i wish i could say i am still feeling great but thank you for saying it is lovely means alot (:
This sounds like a ancient scroll nicely done

Posted 3 Years Ago


TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

never thought of it that way love new perspective thanks for reading (:
Pink Pastel

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
WOW! This is a brilliant one!
"In thine eyes i breathe sun,"
I love this line so much, I don't know what made you think this!
Great job!
keep writing :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

THANK YOU SO MUCH I WILL KEEP WRITING !!! GLAD YOU LOVED IT (:
God! It is a beautifully peaceful poem. Her eyes must be truly beautiful and innocent. : )

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much glad you liked it ! i am bad at conveying my feelings to people glad you found it .. read more
A beautifully expressed poem. . . :)
From the way I interpreted it (though I'm not sure if I'm right), this poems speaks of the peace, fulfillment, and happiness of being loved in return. And I wold agree. That feeling's on of the most uplifting feelings one could perceive.
That's how I saw it. :) But it would be kind of you to tell its true meaning.
Thanks for inviting me to read! :) I'm glad you are also finding other types of feelings to convey through your poems.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

you are indeed right in that interpretation but that is only part of it i was also speaking about ho.. read more
thaleeyaLuna

3 Years Ago

Don't worry, you explained it well. That was very nice indeed. :)
Very nice read : ) well done 👍

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thanks glad you enjoyed it (:
The meaning in this is complex, yet, elegantly woven together. Even though I can't completely understand this, it's still beautiful, indeed. Wonderful job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much i will leave this one a mystery until someones guesses it (: more fun

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Added on August 22, 2016
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