she was and she was

she was and she was

 

 

 

elementary emotions

like first grade crushes

chaotic moments

composure flattened

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/30/18

Reviews

[Lanny]

Nice and impactful, and done with such conciseness of expression.

I enjoyed the read, and all the best,

Lanny

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Lanny,
j.

[Norman 223]

Ah, puppy love - when the tail wags the dog. We've all been there Jacob.
N.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Norman,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I'm still smiling, this was just great.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cherrie...so glad this could make a smile emerge.
j.

[Stella Armour]

made me smile Jacob, first love and not knowing how to handle it ..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Stella,
j.

[Cory Barrett]

My dad once told me "puppy love means nothing, except to the puppy". Its a hump to get over for sure.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your father was pretty smart...thanks, Cory,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful use of words Jacob. Make me think, wander and smile. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Coyote,
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jacob.

[DIVYA]

The first crush roller coaster ride is so well captured here, Jacob. She was and she was and somewhere she will always be! Just loved this poem 💕

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, DIVYA...
j.

[andrew mitchell]

yes that first sight that arouses the senses, "I must have syndrome" only to be followed by her rejection, then the composure crashes!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.
j.

[Onlyme]

Oh, this bites, true, raw and deeply meaningful. I think most folk, would and could relate to this one. Fleeting moments of euphoria then kick in the butt afterwards leaving you to feel deflate and thinking. What happened? Great short poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Dawn,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent brevity full of so much to say and relate. I love how you describe situations past and present. Marvelous Jacob...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, Jacob.