STOP THE INSANITY!!!

STOP THE INSANITY!!!

A Poem by Frieda P
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just a bit of nonsense to quell the fires

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Let's stop this in house cafe bickering
I suggest a food fight instead...
getting smacked upside the head
doesn't hurt half as bad as what's been said
it only leaves a bad taste in the mouth
let's get back to the joy of writing what's in our noggin
instead of letting all that raw sewage seep out
now that will surely whet your appetite 
& no taste left for food, 
sooo, here's to tomatoes in your face &
margaritas poured over your head
watch out for that flying dog!

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This is priceless Frieda! Would that be grand, to hurl food full pace at the people who manage to anger us most! (Usually the ones we love and live with!) The final three lines reminded me of Tom&Jerry, in addition to your comical hot dog picture the "wacky races" kind of image came rushing into my head! Very fun and full of energy Frieda, this shows that all poetry can be great, even if it does not have incredible depth! Great work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Willow, glad you enjoyed it :-)



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True! We are here to write and not to fight. So just concentrate on writing and help one another to improve our skill.

Thanks a lot I have some friends who guided me here as a new writer.

A nice, witty poem. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Dhaye :-) .................
here's looking at " pigs in blankets"... and "apple pie beds"... +(*_*)+ ( in England anyway)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stella Armour

10 Years Ago

and putting pigs in blankets...lol
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Hahaha you're evil woman! ;-P I love it!
Stella Armour

10 Years Ago

hahaha.. well you wanted a nonsense thread...
I agree. I have no time for separation. We are here to read and write. I'm thankful for the kind people who read my work and give me purpose to keep writing. A long time ago. Some great writer said. "If I can save or change one life. I accomplished something." Thank you for your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Love that quote, thanks Coyote.
Nice refreshing read FP... loving the humour in this witty write

It's great to be reading your work again..

YP

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie YB, nice to see you again too, thanks so much...

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Added on June 22, 2013
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Tags: insanity, food fight, bickering, nonsense

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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