~Mystical Yearnings

~Mystical Yearnings

A Poem by Frieda P


I loved you 'fore the beginning of time
mystical yearnings captivated my soul
endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,
intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  
senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria
my existence lies in the spirit of heart
let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer
the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss
power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,
beyond the starry night, void of space
transcending all earthly joys
an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration
fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies
hungering for your taste of passion
drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

© 2014 Frieda P



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Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"


Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino i.. read more



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Holy cow Jack said it all...simply loved this. Piece!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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B.J
Wow that is so romantic and lovely

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love how its said "mystical yearnings captivated my soul" as welll as "intoxicated with loves cherry wine" I love the sense of wording you use and the follow and passion in the writing, its really strong and deep, good job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit and review demii, jazz'd you enjoyed this one.
Absolutely splendid my friend ,your poems are such a pleasure to read :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Vidya. :-)
Vidya Bacchus

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
You adorned this romantic piece with the summary of universe's creations. Not my style of writing but you are definitely good with this style! Looking forward to reading more.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Arzel, muchly appreciated.
Beautful just beautiful Frieda. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kazie, glad you enjoyed :-)
Blackstar

3 Years Ago

Your welcome my friend. :-)
Frieda,
What a beautiful poem! It certainly goes right to my soul sending me on a spiritual dance with bells on my fingers and toes flying through the universe dancing on a magic carpet to your music!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Wow victoria, what a glowing review and great imagery in your response! Thanks so much.
A love filled poem and the great yearning will sure call back the lover.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit and review Vandana.
Great photo, poem and music. I'd say it's the total package. Great work Frieda

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much Baby.
Wow your words are so beautiful and touching! I especially love the line "endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,".

Very beautiful and passionate poem!


Posted 3 Years Ago


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Frieda P

3 Years Ago

So glad you enjoyed, thanks for your visit and review!
ashesonfire

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome :D

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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