Synchronicity of rhythm's rhyme ~

      

 A

rose on wings 

             of poetry's flight,

      fire within

        leaked through

             inky passages,

     mindful reminisces

          singing of heart,

rendered lyrics of

 exhaustive

            mind f*****g songs,

broken pieces

                 & puzzle's shadow,

bird's of paradise

  

soar to surrender in

       ocean's depths 

                   of forgone seasons,

      wildflowers whirling on 

                    baby's breath zephyrs,

             blood spilled 

                in the name of the father,

 cosmic encounters

                under moonlit excursions,

whimsy of fairy dust

                 upon fluffy icicle clouds

posh feathers tickling

          perfumed leather & lace,

     took the long way

 home 

       on the road less

           traveled of poesy,

          transporting phases

                   as phantasm's heights

 dance in the 

       synchronicity

         of

                         rhythm's 

                                    rhyme

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

This makes me wonder and send me en- dreaming I had to make that word up I think I don't have any other way to share with you what it is that happens to me when you write this way. But the opposity of a logical intruction manual like them used in Ikea Step 1 do this step 10 you have achived this. Imaginative - thinking maybe but it comes short as well. I feel as if it was a passage of yourself , breathing , consuming , changing, and how different influences affect your life. I just admire the way you share it. Of course as I have confessed early I am only glad that I can accompany your journey.

Won't even try walking in your shoes probably I 'll get blisters.

Thankyou

[Frieda P]

Woo your review blew my skirt up this morning Rene. Love the new word, apropos, we're all dreamers in our own unique way, no? That's why I'm more comfortable in flip flops, exposed and no blisters. Grazie mille.

[beautiful dreamer]

if you gave me a poem and didnt tell me who it was by i could almost always tell you if it was yours because your writing is so perfectly mind baffling. like the flow of this one i could really follow it without getting too tripped up.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Frieda, I have no idea what message you were trying to convey, but you are just such an incredible master of pairing the most awesome music to your pieces....I get lost in the entire mystical experience. I've read through your poem twice and have no idea what the @#* you're referring to, but it doesn't matter at all, because it all sounds so good, I just like to let the assonance and consonance of your creation toy with my axons and dendrites....thank you!

[Kleio13]

At first you sounded pissed off with "rendered lyrics of exhaustive mind f*****g songs, broken pieces & puzzle's shadow," but then I kept reading and realized that it`s about the excitement of adventure within chaos. At least that`s how I take it. K.

[Ashira Macy]

This one was smoother than silk. The wording and the way you set it up contributed equally to this fact I think. Really gorgeous imagery throughout took me on a mystical journey between different dimensions, some magical, and some like our own.

[Foxemerald]

The visual attractiveness of your word is striking. This is a whimsical, brief ride- a puff, a cloud of energy, that carries us into a world of fantastic color, and then brings us safely back- a motivating piece. It is lively, and full of spirit; a rainbow of acrylic paints streaked in harmony- beautifully written.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent imagery to the vision! A lot of great lines in this poetic poem!

[KAREN]

Great imagery. i find the poem thought provoking, very dreamy!

[willweb]

I felt as if I were falling the entire time I read this poem today. Dream falling would be more like it, falling without fear of hitting the ground. This poem really sent me on this dream like flight and the landing was perfect. I really enjoyed this today Frieda P.

[Einstein Noodle]

"rendered lyrics of
exhaustive
mind f*****g songs," ... those lines pop!!! well placed says i

out of all the confusion .. there are connections and the beat of purpose ... but for me .. it is always the ride that counts ... those are the choices that determine the end game ... perfect rendition of the tune .. and the themes of life strewn throughout in your own unmitigated style and touch .. i am your fan for sure .. :)
E.