Naked Soul

Naked Soul

A Chapter by Goddisia

disappearing voices echo in the changing room of my memories
 
I take them off my heart like clothes that hold my body too tight
 
naked, my soul stands in front of million mirrors
 
what I see takes my breath away
 
slowly I choke - the tears drowning me from the inside
 
 
how can a heart be so filled with fire that its own agony feels like ecstasy
 
how can a heart feel so cold with just one single flame missing...
 
the answers dance encircling closley the flickering wall of heat
 
if I look deeply inside to see the truth
 
I will burn
 
 
I stand motionless and breathless
 
your eyes reflected in the mirrors
 
your words echoing back from the walls of my heart
 
white all-consuming ocean of love envelops me slowly but surely
 
soon there will be no "me" left
 
soon I will breathe through your mouth
 
I will feel through your skin
 
I will desire through your eyes
 
soon...
 
 
When the dawn awakes the sun
 
and the first ray of light kisses our faces
 
naked, my soul will stand in front of yours
 
without a doubt
 
without second thoughs
 
without safety measures
 
losing myself completely
 
I will come up into your arms
 
and you will hold me



© 2010 Goddisia



Andrew Nelson Stewart Andrew Nelson Stewart
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A amazing poem. Description was powerful. The inner conversation leading to self evaluation. So many powerful lines. A poem of looking at yourself. Sometime hard to see anything that is good. Ending allow the mind and body to fall into desire and passion. A safeness for a time. A excellent poem. A poem you must read more then one time.
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To me, this is priceless! You've touched my heart this evening and to you, my heartfelt gratitude goes out!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Beautiful! Your describe this moment of time so perfectly. Your characters voice is strong and brings us within our own soul.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A amazing poem. Description was powerful. The inner conversation leading to self evaluation. So many powerful lines. A poem of looking at yourself. Sometime hard to see anything that is good. Ending allow the mind and body to fall into desire and passion. A safeness for a time. A excellent poem. A poem you must read more then one time.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is quite the remarkable write. So much said here. I can feel this.
Powerful and wonderful write!

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Wow stunningly beautiful write! To lose one self in another and lose all inhibitions, fears is a true gift to experience. This is powerful and one of my favorites of your writings so far. Bravo on this one!

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Added on December 29, 2009
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Goddisia
Goddisia

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