One Small Voice

One Small Voice

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
"

not one group owns it ... all groups owe it ..

"

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one small voice


few trite noises
                      with 
rights 

cast out to sea

                       hard the
lizard licking 
            slick slip lips

on the tongues of

un - 
      ruling gavels

                       pounding
pound
              pound     
                                down and 
grounding. 
          


Baluga smiles.

one small voice
lost lions roar
paper thin
inferno soars

10/18/2016
E.  




© 2016 Einstein Noodle



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Einstein Noodle

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There are number of lines here that I don't like. Because I did not think of them first. This whole write takes the reader on an almost staccato development. Bouncing (as the format emphasises) from one thought pole, one concept to another and yet the whole is satisfying as far as structure is concened. Subject however is another matter entirely. I find the formost feeling I get it one of unease. I maybe way out there but I feel you do not intend the reader to walk away with a feeling of contentment. You wish to continue the thinking as perhaps the inner child, as some one else mentioned, does. In any event it is striking workmanship.
Beluga smile indeed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes .. definitely unease and a thinking thing:) i so appreciate your candid remarks .. and your visi.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

ps so glad you listened to and watched the video ;)))))))



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You're too damn good for the rest of us to bear/bare/
dana

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

getattatown hd ... now your just jiving me ;) i'm tickled you liked this one .. small voices are goi.. read more
I believe that the child inside You is still alive like You are still a little child, free from pain, smiling to his simple toys... from the title, image to the video, all deeply emotionally touch my heart, and I feel You in each line of Your poem, sad... actually so sad, for once You wanted to back there, oh! I understand it! there is no need for all Your words to be understood by all, it's understood in our hearts, each of these "trite noises" does have the right, to live to dream, to be anything they want, even animals... and each small voice can reach over seas and up into the skies.... can make a difference in this world, just looking at that photo hurts my heart and bring me tears... yes, I also grew up watching Sesame Street...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

i appreciate you taking time to look for this one...and for such an in depth reading and analysis .... read more
Light

6 Months Ago

I'm happy that when I commnted back to Your review it appeared to the right page (Related Writings)... read more
Brilliant! Your deeply moving poem and video brought me to tears E...our world has moved so far away from these ideals- so many voices ignored now. Your words are relevant and important. “Rights cast out to sea”- so true. I wish our President could read and watch this, but who am I kidding? He’d dismiss it as “fake news” anyway. Small voices must be supported and encouraged to be raised and heard. Kudos for your courage and your heart my friend!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

hm not sure that he would Annette ....he has come out in favor of rights of the unborn .... and this.. read more
This does it for me my friend on so many different levels. A real treat to consider at any time of day. Now one of my favourwrites for sure.....Cheers, Neville

Posted 9 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

Neville ... thank you so much for finding this one and i am so gratified it had such a positive effe.. read more
Neville Pettitt

9 Months Ago

No problem, my pleasure...
I agree with Ken Simm. I was in tears but was uneasy but very interesting to read different
I'm so emotional lately I weep and cry at anything that's sad or uneasy but I enjoyed reading it. Thank you. God bless my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

1 Year Ago

I'm sorry about your wife Thank you this is a lot more intense then I've felt with anything I've lo.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

keeping you in my prayers Benita ... for comfort and assurance for peace and joy for health and heal.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

1 Year Ago

Thank you my friend 😢 I appreciate it
Sounds like a version of the People versus the Big Gov.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

sounds like we are on the same wave Kate! ;) thank you for reviewing .. have the greatest day ever!<.. read more
Cryingkate

1 Year Ago

:-) You too
The paper tiger origami - an allusion to the U.N. perhaps.
The gavel of judgement will fall upon us all for collectively turning a deaf ear to the children's pleas.
Emotive necessary write E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thanks Tony! i like you take on the UN .. i think the US has carried the financial burden for the UN.. read more
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

Well saving cash via webinars and virtual confs makes far too much sense to be adopted anytime soon .. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) .............
I love the rhythm of this...the tone and the surreal quality...beautifully done...gives me the impression of recent events of politics but not completely, just my mind wandering so ignore my reflections :) Loved it...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

hi Poppy! so happy for your comments and your reading with sensitivity and openness ... politics was.. read more
Love the sound play in this - a rumbling build- a stirring on the water - an advance....it perfectly carries the words forward Technically brilliant and creatively penned. I felt the warning in it as well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

TL you have truly made my day ... i could not be more happy and gratified ...thank you ma'am! very m.. read more
This was really good and very deep. I like the childlike form and very adult message. Love the use of the gavel in this, to me it's ringing with injustice and oppression and an end to innocence. The pounding of the gavel pounding the voices into submission.

Maybe I read a little too far into this. Outstanding.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you James .. for your sensitive reading ... innocence is such a treasure ...it gets trampled i.. read more

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