The Voice Of Reasoning

Creative Poetry Group: We had to write about the picture!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A siren's voice speaking in the deep sub-conscience

Articulate words of reasoning racing through the brain,

instilling ingredients of right from wrong

Alluring sounds that are conspicuous

 

Counterfeit truth deafen ears

Insulated thoughts block sub-conscience

Intense feelings surface deep in the abyss heart

Stop, listen to me, a brillant intelligent voice orders

 

Strong existence is over powering

Divine essence of personality

Envisage images are vivid.

A duplicate of self speaking from within,

pushing you to aspire

 

Coherent voice radiates consolation,

yearning to colaborate with your outer being

Mind becomes lucid

Stop, listen to the voice of reasoning,

your conscience, a guidance through life

 

 

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Loner]

I can never write like u do....

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thanks for the complement, but your writing is super!

[Loner]

* Smiles * ........ U are always welcome

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Amazing. Beautifully penned. Nicely done.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I find this to be very spiritual I could go on as what it means to me but as I’ve said before poetry is always open to interpretation. As for me I like this very much.
Excellent write.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is amazing!

[An owl on the moon]

You speak of those voices that call us... from without and within... directing, deceiving, delighting... and the voice of reason that can guide us through life's pitfalls... May we learn to listen!

[Cherrie Palmer]

A wonderful play on words and the inner thoughts of the soul

[patricia]

You manage to catch the ego, the id, the altar ego, the highest thought, the lowest thought, This was realy fascinating, and that picture was amazing! thankyou.

[UnderCompulsion]

Nice poem. :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

What a wonderful poem this is ....
and the subconcious is an intriguing topic for me...
the conflict that arises, terrificly expressed...
great poen :)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Nicely done.