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The tree

The tree

A Poem by Juliespenhere
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Saw this at a botanical garden today

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Standing out of the crowd
Easy
Lose your clothes (leaves branches)
Bark at them birds bark get it 😋
Lose your protective layer
Stand proud n tall
And stand your ground
Most of all be original
Strangely different from the rest
The horizon is yours
To see


© 2018 Juliespenhere



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Trees inspire me in so many ways! They never try to be what they are not, I've known them to be the best listeners, they are generous to the small birds and mammals that need a home, and they supply us with the necessary oxygen, provide shade and so much more. Your poem honors that in the mighty tree and I also enjoy your playful word choices. nice job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Thanks to all reviews sorry net connection been unreliable on holidays back Monday

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lovely descriptions in this wonderful little gem :) Julie

Posted 6 Months Ago


Thanks to all that review.ed this ditty

Posted 6 Months Ago


Amazing I love trees as they just ‘be’, lovely poem🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


Love this Julie! Great image, wordplay and lesson here. Cleverly and humorously presented. The singular tree in it’s naked truth can still stand tall and “bark”-ha! Horizons belong to everyone- yes! Great!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Thanks Alex glad u liked
Thanks

Posted 6 Months Ago


what a wonderful little write

Posted 6 Months Ago


Thanks Robert for your lovely review

Posted 6 Months Ago



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Added on January 28, 2018
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Juliespenhere
Juliespenhere

Sydney , Australia



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Amateur old poet well not that old but not a young 20 anymore I still work full time and live to write I write at least five poems ditties every weekend I write quickly it just flows and bubbles qui.. more..

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