Teach Me

Teach me how 

to live like you

with wide eyes

and colorful dreams

Teach me how

to find the world

ignore the bad

and see beauty

Teach me how

to think like you

with gold thoughts

and diamond heart

Teach me how

to love like you

and I'll learn

as I fall apart

-l.r.

Reviews

[Crazycatgirl_10]

I really liked this. Reminded me that love is not just affection. It's wanting to be taught stuff and be shown stuff through the other's eyes. Really good poem I loved it.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful write.
Was well written out, and very deep and meaningful.
I wish someone would teach me all this to.
Its hard to see life in such light, be good if we all did though.
Great write :)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[armin]

Very well penned ,the last part was excellent.
Well done.
I enjoyed the read.

Spidey. ...

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[Ana B.]

Very sweet and endearing :) Loved reading it.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you:)

[Tony]

Sounds like the voice or narration is saying if they "think" or "love" like the "you" in this poem-- they know they will "fall apart." So the message of the poem is saying they won't "think" or "love" like the "you."
If that makes sense:D lol Anyway-- thought provoking poem:)

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you, I think? :)

[tedefroberts]

Very nice! Succinct and easy to read!

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[SmittyJas]

Very lovely It shows a beautiful mind and heart and a blessed soul. Charming my friend Loved it all the way. More word just can not say. Your words bless me tenderly.

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much! You are too kind.

[SAYED THANGAL]

It so rhythmic and widens the mind to feel ourselves and see others, good one
sayed,India

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[SAYED THANGAL]

Most welcome

[Lizardo]

Very Intriguing poem with a powerful message, I really enjoyed Reading this excellent pice of worl
Great Job

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you!

[diamonddave75]

Beautiful write.. Nice flow.. Explosive imagery.. Thanks for sharing.. Dave

[Lexi Richard]

Thank you so much!