strange enough

strange enough

A Poem by babyblue

 

 

 

 

Strange enough

By Ivonne L.

 

Being with you is like looking into a stranger's face complete. I can't say nothing to you but impress or hide from you.

Even thou we were one before ever since you have been a stranger to me. Yet strange enough I miss you, and I want you back.

It's such a shame that I lost you for someone who just wasn't worth it. Yet strange enough I shouldn't think twice. It’s bad luck, so I should just move on and let you be.

Strange enough I'd would rather have those precious moments we had. Then never have had you at all, so I say good bye to you and farewell.

 

© 2009 babyblue


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i like it, u just have a few spelling errors. very nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing job!
I loved it!


Posted 9 Years Ago


great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh the heartache of moving on when your mind tells you its
time and your heart is yearning for what was.

Thank you for submitting this lovely poem to my "A Chance to
Shine Contest"~! ~ Helena

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is genuinely a great piece of writing, so heartfelt and strong!
I really loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


even thou we were one before ever since you've been a stranger to me.yet strange enough I miss you,and i want you back.

I like your style. Nice work...thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was very cool, I liked it a lot. The only thing I would change is though not tho

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Hey my names ivonne i'm 19 I wirte stores,and poems i go to college . I like scremo,punk,and classic rock bands such as bob marley bob dylan underoath,sliverstian,misfits,daed kenadys,the door,and t.. more..

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