Lovestory

Lovestory

A Story by Mitali Shah

Two souls
One warm
Other cold
Eyes meet
Opposites attract
Hearts illuminate
Chemistry strikes
Sense passion
Unite together
Till eternity


© 2015 Mitali Shah



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Oh my gosh, I love how even though you only used two words per line, you told a whole story with strong words.


Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Alondra for the appreciation :)
When chemistry strike. It is over.
"Chemistry strikes
Sense passion
Unite together
Till eternity"
Nice flow of words led to the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Pretty words
Deep meanings
Tell stories
Intrigue Readers

I fell in love with your writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Shivai
A sweet poem Mitali....trying to capture the meeting of opposite sex.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Rajat
two souls searching in the night,beautiful concept

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thanks Wordman
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
So true on opposites attract.I always believe in love and eternity if that love is true. Beautiful poem Mitali.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Completely agree with your Robert.
. Each couplet a story in itself and the whole is the ultimate in romantic brevity here Mitali.
Very enjoyable (but rare??) tale of success in love
Love the imagery of the hearts illuminated by the chemistry between them - a sublime short.
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mitali Shah

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much ANTO

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Added on July 12, 2015
Last Updated on July 12, 2015
Tags: love, heart, passion

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Mitali Shah
Mitali Shah

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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