Dissemination

Dissemination

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

Dissemination

truth- like
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the Waters ressurected with
 skies and clouds to color
glowing  yellow aura the sun and
rains falling

seeking the filtering of sand, limestone and charcoal
 greys.... altering .... changing

truth-morph
______________________

springing bubbles; melting ice; and
all those words disseminating

past eons honest as fossils

palatable on the road ..hot black macadam
tar rising up and busting the sweat
pitter patterings
trace poisonings 
spreading a suffocation of confetti smalls

crying....no wailings allowed
no availing forgiveness
with all those waters in evil accord.

Image result for stagnant water

E. 04/05/18

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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Your poem is itself a “disseminating” red sun of apocalyptic truth my friend. Exploding, imploding earth in “hot black macadame tar” fumes...brilliant imagery, brilliant language, form, flow, balance. Chronicles in fossils. Great poem with a most important warning. Kudos!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

oh! i need to correct my spelling don't i?! ;) macadam :))))))))) i love your sensitive reads and in.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

5 Years Ago

Ha! I Didn’t even notice- your poem was that good my friend! Thank you much for your words E.:)))
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:) .........................



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The mood is somewhat dreary these days. We're all feeling it. The weight of the world and the burden we place upon it exacerbated by cynical politics and doomsday scenarios ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

yes! that is all of what i am saying in this one Lyn! thank you for taking time always ...great to s.. read more
Sadly, the end is eventually going to come to us all and this plsnet called earth one day! How truly sad this world is becoming in general!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

yes ... truly sad indeed ... and it seems the crap does flow down hill doesn't it ... piling up on t.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Hugs. Einstein
Thank you for the review "The Encounter". I seem to do better with short stories. I read your poem "Disseminating". You have a way of form and knowledge of words that some day I hope to achieve. I had to read it a few times to absorb and enjoy it. well done. Vic

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

i appreciate the time you spent to read my poem ... there are a lot of poetry that i read over and o.. read more
I read this wonderful poem as a 'call to arms' when it comes to the environment. It is such a sad state of affairs and now we are actually witnessing the results of the neglect with the changes in weather patterns, melting glaciers etc. A very powerful, important message you have put here with your amazing style and grace.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dara

5 Years Ago

I am afraid my review may have been a bit simplistic in relation to the depth of your poem, but I am.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

simple state ...simply Nirvana :)))))))))))))))))))) hugs Dara ..i sure respect and appreciate our f.. read more
Dara

5 Years Ago

Same goes for me. Hope you have a great weekend 🤗
Garbage in, garbage out; seems more the way of the world every passing day. Plastic bags and bottles, the latest must have (and entirely pointless,) gadget, political rhetoric with no answers, the great god Google, buy one get one free, (didn't even want the first one,) it's a never ending stream that assaults and assails the senses until you want to scream 'Stop the world, I want to get off!,'

A hard hitting poem you have penned here.

Beccy.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

exactly it Beccy ... and so nice to see you peaking in on me pages ;))
i think there are many.. read more
What have we done to the water? Like the water of the world which has become so polluted, so the 'water' of our minds! Let's hope this is just a wake-up call, so that the 'filtering of sand , limestone and charcoal' can clear both land and minds. This is a very cleverly descriptive and heartfelt poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

if we could liquefy our "minds" and send them through that filtering we would be so so much more hea.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

5 Years Ago

You are surely welcome, Mr Einstein.
it's april...it's the rains of spring...and then the warming, the drying out, much like we do in life...the rains pour on us, we get pain and heartbreak but a spring comes...and we come back to life...we grow stronger toward that sun that lights our heart.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

what a fine and positive outlook my friend...thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts on it ... read more
dear Gene... I walked on the Bay of Funday in Nova Scotia Canada in 1970. The fossils were awesome. Your poetry reflects the earth with change over time as it evolves. The magnificent treasures are part of our being here. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear E... I am not forgetting the beauty of nature and wildlife.... all the gorgeous giraffes and so.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

its a boat-full to remember isn't it?! i believe that when we entertain healthy thoughts ..it is the.. read more
Patricia Wedel

5 Years Ago

dear E... Good will win over evil... it will be an enlightening... Amen
Altho your music & artwork choices lead some of us to think about all that junk swirling around in our big Pacific Garbage Patch (well-publicized curse going on for years) . . . I tend to be in "overload" mode lately, thinking of our public discourse as being a similar swirl of never-ending junk colliding & disseminating in a way where the junk heaps tend to line up in stark divisions. Your vivid imagery is expressed with fresh imagination, which could apply to either case! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

hi Ms. Barley! spot on observations says i! can be taken either way for sure...and perhaps several m.. read more
evolution has always been a good thing in my opinion but here we are now in a world where we are evolving in the wrong way. like undoing progress.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

perhaps my friend ...the universe continues to change and humans do seem to loose sight of the truth.. read more

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