Dissemination

Dissemination

truth- like

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the Waters ressurected with

 skies and clouds to color

glowing  yellow aura the sun and

rains falling

seeking the filtering of sand, limestone and charcoal

 greys.... altering .... changing

truth-morph

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springing bubbles; melting ice; and

all those words disseminating

past eons honest as fossils

palatable on the road ..hot black macadam

tar rising up and busting the sweat

pitter patterings

trace poisonings 

spreading a suffocation of confetti smalls

crying....no wailings allowed

no availing forgiveness

with all those waters in evil accord.

E. 04/05/18

Author's Note

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Your poem is itself a “disseminating” red sun of apocalyptic truth my friend. Exploding, imploding earth in “hot black macadame tar” fumes...brilliant imagery, brilliant language, form, flow, balance. Chronicles in fossils. Great poem with a most important warning. Kudos!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! i need to correct my spelling don't i?! ;) macadam :))))))))) i love your sensitive reads and insightful reviews Annette ... you are like my guide stick to gauge how i have done .. so i can not thank you enough for reading and reviewing .. everyone is truly so helpful around hear .. thanks again dear friend!
E.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Ha! I Didn’t even notice- your poem was that good my friend! Thank you much for your words E.:)))

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .........................

[lightsong]

amazing the imaginary You have here, really amazing! very intense, very effective, very strong filled with anger, bitterness and sad feelings to the reality that speaks very loud, Your title is perfect, giving the sense how words... well lies spread so fast, Your first verse really so very wonderful! then in the second You tell us clearly about it all with Your steady tune, and yes I felt the world becoming polluted, that's the power of Your words here, also the presentation is great to match the feelings while Your poem.

all the beauty, happiness and peace for You Mr.E*

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you once again Light, for reading with attention and sensitivity ..i sure do appreciate your review of encouragement ..we all need some time and again eh! ... hugs and peace and joy back at ya dear friend
E.

[Paul Bell]

Words are so powerful.
Words dropped in earshot of your enemy, can change the course of history.
Fake news. Advertising news.
You wonder why people shut themselves away.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! my sentiments exactly Paul! last night i briefly watched the CNN politics and issues forum as a panel of "journalists" discussed what their job is and how misinformed the pulic is about it...allegedly asking questions like ..."how can you print a story without knowing who it is from ..(we don't understand what "anonymous source" means ... and "how can you print stories when you haven't talked to anyone" ..(we don't understand how they research and pursue stories) ... i just can't imagine very many people being concerned enough to ask them about their stories ask such stupid questions ... the majority, says i, are quite informed and intelligent ... that's how we know when journalists are bullshitting and leaning/omitting facts to cause readers to be most influenced by the story ... i watched and listened about 5 minutes before i had to shut myself away ... sheesh! thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts ..much appreciated sir!
E.

[Paul Bell]

I think you just take everything with a pinch of salt now.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes.... for sure