Outdated Hope

Stars shine in dark sky

light from yesteryears comes

hopes lost to past time

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

nicely written, i can feel emotions run through this one

[Pax]

sad and brilliant words

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. "outdated hope" ... brilliant title ... brilliantly justified ...

[Ed Hart]

bam! still seeing stars that went out three eons ago

[Emily B]

oh, I just had a conversation about stars that are so far away that they've burnt out long before the light reaches us . . . does everybody have such conversations?

I hope so