Water (Haiku)

Honorable mention in Contest

Dark water was deep

Cold waters now embrace me

 Darkness now takes over

Author's Note

Honorable mention Haiku Contest

Reviews

[Tina]

I love haikus!! I think they're a great way of packing a punch in a very small amount of syllables. Especially this one. I enjoy the depth and meaning.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Tina. i always appreciate seeing you reading my words. It is very special. i do seem to be getting addicted to them.

[Lizardo]

I really like this, keep up the goo work!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for reading. Someone said this form was addictive and for me that's a short ride. Bu fun.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful I've
always wanted to do Haiku's.

But I read them
since I can't write them.


Thank you for sharing.

God bless. Benita

[Willard Wells]

As always I welcome your reading of my work. Thank you. I have had to correct two of them today I was off by on count on the last line on both. Needed to take my time which is not in my tool box.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. It's a pleasure

[mattavelli]

I've always used the 5-7-5 format for haiku. You're using 5-7-6. Making it your own. Well done!

[Willard Wells]

Well done, but not planned. Lost in the process and missed a spot. Working on adjustment me thinks. Thanks for reviewing my work.

[Lydia Shutter]

Excellent Haiku. So emotional! Lydi**

[Willard Wells]

It's kind of fun to see what I find in the depth of my dark hall ways when I set them free, but not to far. Got to keep smiling. Thank you again Lydia for reading my work, it is greatly appreciated.