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WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
To Anonymous

To Anonymous

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)
"

For someone special

"

So much to say, yet such little ink
As my words in your mind will deeply sink
Whilst the blooming fist rolls out its fingers
To reach my face on which it lingers

See, smiles cross oceans and bury deep
As clouds rain down, in roots they seep
But in thus tree find quilt of fruit
And shovel the air to carve a route

And as she sleeps in restless waves
A princess heart she truly saves
With Crystal lips that shine off bright
They break through Dusk to shine tonight

If only those eyes grow ocean wide
And flutter the mountain in which they hide
Id say with words from pores of truth
I've never loved so strong in youth

And oh my dreamer don't fall too far
For in the rainbow ill leave a scar 
Of revolting battles against the wind
As fossil stories of times within

Do arc the bow and shoot ahead
The arrow of romance, with love is fed
I wish to find just one last time
The perfect love and its measured rhyme
A jocund heart dormant and sublime... to anonymous.












© 2017 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)



Author's Note

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)
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Very romantic write. I like how you played with the font although I'm usually not much into that but in this case it had a nice effect. Your word choice fulfills the expectation of a love write; dreamy, romantic, flowery, including a lot of nature and analogies according to that topic. The speech of a modern Shakespearean; soft and flowing into its own sweet abyss.
The word anonymous provided a tad of a sharper and more contemporary tone which makes it a rather unexpectedly good closing line.

Nice write. And nice to meet you again.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much for being able to captivate every little detail of this art. I appreciate when a.. read more
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5 Months Ago

That's good to know and you're welcome. I write for/to realize similar things.



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SSR
Great art there, with your fading ink,
You stroked it until your heart & it sync.................

Posted 2 Months Ago


Achingly beautiful, and even with colors fading and the letters growing faint there is an urgency and desire to find the way home to this place of wonder and love.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

2 Months Ago

Mr Owl, a pleasure. Thank you for stopping by. I will visit some more
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M
This piece is utterly beautiful in every way that you wrote it. It reminds me of a sonnet your writing to the person you love. Its one of those poems you wish you could receive in a love letter. It made me yearn for the times when people expressed their love using a pen and paper and didn't simply text their emotions. You did a great job in provoking these emotions.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Months Ago

Ah, it seems you have been traveling deep into my writing, getting a little warm to the romantic wri.. read more
Very romantic write. I like how you played with the font although I'm usually not much into that but in this case it had a nice effect. Your word choice fulfills the expectation of a love write; dreamy, romantic, flowery, including a lot of nature and analogies according to that topic. The speech of a modern Shakespearean; soft and flowing into its own sweet abyss.
The word anonymous provided a tad of a sharper and more contemporary tone which makes it a rather unexpectedly good closing line.

Nice write. And nice to meet you again.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much for being able to captivate every little detail of this art. I appreciate when a.. read more
Closed

5 Months Ago

That's good to know and you're welcome. I write for/to realize similar things.
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Zoe
I am glad I came across this piece...this is so, so beautiful! Really loved the way you've shown the slowly fading ink. Great creativity there! And a great write as well!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

I feel this is more of an art work than a writing. Thank you for stopping by, I shall return the fav.. read more
It's a shame poems of this caliber and quality are not recognized as much as some pretty girl's poem is.

Stunning indeed.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

I thank you so much for your time and words
There's beauty in good things slowly fading away just like this poem. It's bittersweet but it leaves before it outstays its welcome.

Lovely piece

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

Yes, things do fade at times, and yet... appearance swirls in the end
I rarely comment any more. But by chance I stumbled up this piece of art. Simply stunning....100/100

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

Its such an honor to pull you in for just a second and be blessed by your words
wow.. I love the imagery with the words getting lighter I loved the flow and I am astonished at the perfect message great work...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

Im glad you stumbled into this one, I would of been sad if you didn't read it
Writing Angel

6 Months Ago

may I ask why?
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Lei
Ah, the ever lasting battle of love. I enjoyed the fading ink. There are times where we often cannot say all that we wished we had. Life can be so sudden, and time never seems to align. All thats left is to fade in silence. Nicely captured.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

6 Months Ago

Very nice of you to say such things. Yes Love will never end

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Worcester, MA



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My writing is strongly based on science, culture, myths and fantasy. I do enjoy poem writing but short stories are my passion, I am developing a few novels as well. I am looking for any critique that .. more..

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