To Anonymous

For someone special

So much to say, yet such little ink

As my words in your mind will deeply sink

Whilst the blooming fist rolls out its fingers

To reach my face on which it lingers

See, smiles cross oceans and bury deep

As clouds rain down, in roots they seep

But in thus tree find quilt of fruit

And shovel the air to carve a route

And as she sleeps in restless waves

A princess heart she truly saves

With Crystal lips that shine off bright

They break through Dusk to shine tonight

If only those eyes grow ocean wide

And flutter the mountain in which they hide

Id say with words from pores of truth

I've never loved so strong in youth

And oh my dreamer don't fall too far

For in the rainbow ill leave a scar 

Of revolting battles against the wind

As fossil stories of times within

Do arc the bow and shoot ahead

The arrow of romance, with love is fed

I wish to find just one last time

The perfect love and its measured rhyme

A jocund heart dormant and sublime... to anonymous.

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[V]

Very romantic write. I like how you played with the font although I'm usually not much into that but in this case it had a nice effect. Your word choice fulfills the expectation of a love write; dreamy, romantic, flowery, including a lot of nature and analogies according to that topic. The speech of a modern Shakespearean; soft and flowing into its own sweet abyss.
The word anonymous provided a tad of a sharper and more contemporary tone which makes it a rather unexpectedly good closing line.

Nice write. And nice to meet you again.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much for being able to captivate every little detail of this art. I appreciate when a reader tales their time in a writing. I truly wanted to create something that could have not just words, not just feeling, but connection and visualization. I'm not a fan of colors either but this one really asked for it.

[V]

That's good to know and you're welcome. I write for/to realize similar things.

[Lei]

Ah, the ever lasting battle of love. I enjoyed the fading ink. There are times where we often cannot say all that we wished we had. Life can be so sudden, and time never seems to align. All thats left is to fade in silence. Nicely captured.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Very nice of you to say such things. Yes Love will never end

[Kesha]

I really enjoyed this piece & the fading of the colors made it all the more enjoyable, nicely penned!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Im glad you understood the fade

[Jes' Pi]

Very nice poem...
I like the colors you used.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you very much :)

[TheGrimm_Sleeper]

You're writing it made me feel something, something I feel I've been longing for. You're writing is an art and I can't wait to read more.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Dear Olivia. I thank you for feeling motion out of it.

[TheGrimm_Sleeper]

No thank you for sharing something so real.

[Island Hippy]

Very graceful and romantic. The last verse is exquisite. Izzy

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ah your comments always light the day

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Sometimes, mere words are not enough to say what a heart yearns to convey and if it's a matter of across the oceans, it's all the more hard...

This has a beautiful touch. I loved the last stanza the most.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ah, I am humbled

[Ana Papaya]

A jocund heart, I have not heard that word in some time. Very cool. Nice and romantic poem. Beautifully penned, Drift.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thank you dear Papaya

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome Drift!