XIBerSerkErIX

I'm a 17 year old from maine. I just recently decided to try my hand at some short story writings. Hoping to get some useful feedback to improve on. Thank you all very much.

** UPDATE** I am now 20 years old and have returned. Many new things have occured. I fell in love and now have a beautiful baby boy on the way. And i am now more determined than ever to get somthing published. So here we go.