The Rain

The Rain

A Poem by 20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire

Streets, Slippery When Wet
Safe Under Your Umbrella
Traffic Backed Up, Rain �"

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i am a firm believer in walking in the rain ... ;) tho it does present its unique risks for pedestrian and vehicles ... i enjoyed standing on the corner under your umbrella ... coincidentally it has been raining here since about 3 AM ... its now 5:30 ... we have a tin roof on the cabin and its is like music to me :)
https://youtu.be/y86kDFaJ2h4
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Wonderful use of words. I loved the poetry. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very visual. I saw a couple arm in arm in heavy traffic and rain. Second visit, enjoyed it as much as first time.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Don't feel/think anything but umbrella. "I'm sentimental so i walk in the rain. i got some habits even i can't explain..." Sinatra liked the rain as well! Too all it appears to use, beauty, sorrow, resentment is In the eye of the beholders, too each their own! Pleasures thanks! Keep those thoughts coming!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Rain is always a good subject for creativity, I love very relaxed rainy days where it rains all day but it's not windy at all it just falls pleasantly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Been there, done that, can see it vividly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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The idea of safety within him
When rain comes
He is the one to make it all go away

Love the brevity

Posted 1 Year Ago


I quite enjoy a walk in the rain. I like the look of the wetness on everything and also the smell of rainfall. There is something very refreshing about it. Cleansing even. A visual little write.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Much like E. I like the rain...it is raining here right now...when I walk the dog in the rain I carry an umbrella, but he pays no attention to it and gets soaked. He doesn't appreciate the shelter I offer I guess.

A very good haiku, Stacy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am a firm believer in walking in the rain ... ;) tho it does present its unique risks for pedestrian and vehicles ... i enjoyed standing on the corner under your umbrella ... coincidentally it has been raining here since about 3 AM ... its now 5:30 ... we have a tin roof on the cabin and its is like music to me :)
https://youtu.be/y86kDFaJ2h4
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 30, 2019
Last Updated on May 30, 2019
Tags: rain, haiku, sentry, poetry, xosassystacexo, sassystace

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20 Locks - Hustla Extraordinaire
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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Poet, Actress, Musician, EMT. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind. ☯ Stacy Purvis more..

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