I Despise Whom You've Become.

Walking these streets in the gloomy dark

Listening to nothing but rain falling

Thinking of you and whom you used to be.

 

 

"I despise whom you've become,

Despise what you stand for,

Despise what you've done."

 

 

Written By: A Risen Heroine.

Date: 11th of September.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

A little something I came up with...
Honest Opinon and ignore grammar issues.

Reviews

[ClockWork GRIMM]

it sounds to me, like a war-cry for our generations, that have no great war to fight... just a great war within... like a battle-cry to fix ourselves.,,, I really like this... and I usually don't like short poems... but this is the exception... .

[stars are far]

That was a nice read..
well written :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"I despise whom you've become,
Despise what you stand for,
Despise what you've done."
Great use of words. I like the directness of the ending of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Simple yet very real and honest. I really like it and like how you can express the emotion with very little lines. I can totally relate to this feeling as well. Well done!

[Justin Flume]

So is this for me? O.o