What Is Next?

What Is Next?

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.



I once saw an Angel stumble and fall
Her bright wings covered in dust

Scars ripped open

Tears sliding down

Who'll be there;
To save the Angel whom saved you?




Watched a Hero become the Villain

Turned his back against the alliance

"This means war."

The shrill sound of swords

Still ringing in their heads

Pictures; etched in the minds.


© 2012 A Risen Heroine.

Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

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When a Angel turn from love to hate. We are in trouble. A very good poem. Create a wild vision. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Nice write. it is well writen.

Nr. Nine

Posted 11 Years Ago

Had an odd dark tinge to it this did. But very well written, my friend :D


Posted 11 Years Ago

That was a nice write :)
but a little bit dark

Posted 11 Years Ago

I have an uneasy feeling that somehow i got mentioned here?
Am I wrong?

Posted 11 Years Ago

A Risen Heroine.

11 Years Ago

Yes, yes you are wrong. (:

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5 Reviews
Added on November 5, 2012
Last Updated on November 5, 2012


A Risen Heroine.
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Hello my dear readers, I'm so sorry I won't post that much... God bless you all. (: ~A Risen Heroine~ more..


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