Bye Bye

Goodbyes are so sad...

Bye Bye, My Love

Like a hot air balloon

Fly high

It’s an empty sky

Let’s race you

To the moon

Life is so unfair

No one really cares

Trust me, you couldn’t

Be gone too soon

Blow Off, My Love

Like a hot air balloon

Vanish without

A trace

Float unhinged

In cyberspace

Crashing in a spittoon

Be Gone, Be Gone, My Love

Like a hot air balloon 

Reviews

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"Float unhinged in cyberspace".....now THAT is an apt description, Pestonjee! Though methinks the laws of gravity and ginormous size will conspire to have them crashing down to Earth.....much like their efforts. There is quite an eloquence to your poem and an underhanded sense of wit and delight. I sense more tears of delight than tears of sorrow. Some partings are sweet sorrow yet others are just damn good riddance. And so it is. May they drift aimless in cyberspace woofing and oinking in their failed disgrace! Victory is so sweet. Loved the poem, Pestonjee! Great work. Pop that champagne!

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton and more Brilliance! I'm glad you could see through my tears! They're crocodile tears hahaha. Some people are seriously unhinged and expect fan followings the only thing that would actually follow them are the ones that oink! Thankfully, the public seems to have some sense. Thanks a ton again and again!

[augustus]

Excellent writing. To be free of all restraints. It's almost like being naked in the open air!

[AJNJ]

Thanks a ton sir! Thats a great feeling indeed :)

[augustus]

I also like flying!