Stained Glass Soul

 

Each broken soul is like a pane of shattered glass.

The blue window used to be our purity

The yellow window used to be out happiness

The green window used to be our love

Now they are broken, and hopeless

But if we want to be whole again

We must piece together the shards

When we look upon our window,

We still see just broken pieces,

Glued together hopelessly fragile

Unable to see the real beauty,

When someone else looks at the window

They can see the meticulous detail

The creator put into each piece

They see sunshine filtered into beams of brilliant color

Where the blue blossoms like a flower,

And the yellows hold hidden memories,

While the green whispers the promise of a future

Each line is a lesson learned and a mistake made,

These lines were woven into the design with purpose

They hold together the beauty that is shattered glass

Sometimes broken is beautiful

Author's Note

This poem is dedicated to Quiet Poet

Reviews

[Surrealstorm]

very pretty poem. You remind us that we are all broken in a way and that is part of why we are all so beautiful. It makes everyone unique. great write!

[DistantSmoke]

Brilliant twist on an old poetic image - stained glass. It read with potency and drive.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

wow...I really liked that poem! Great write, Phantom!

[Kelley]

I like the references to the windows
and the colors in this poems .

great write thanks for sharing.
Kelley

[Just Plain Me]

This is beautiful :)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely dedication. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Gheeneil]

Beautiful! Being broken is never bad at all when one looks at it from your POV. Well-penned!

[Cole Spire]

very very VERY detailed in your description. I love the metaphore and the flow. This is one of the better ones I have seen on this site.

cole-

[Queen Jummarrium]

that was so beautiful. the last line was brilliant and so true. it really made me think. the detail of the glass was great. over all an amazing poem

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very beautifully written! The last line was brilliant and wrapped up this piece very well. I love the colors of description that you give to the glass as well. Very good write!