God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[guiltyascharged]

This. Is. So. Touching. I originally didn't believe in God. My main religion was Greek Polytheist, but now I'm totally going Christian because of this. I'm Bi, so I thought God didn't accept us, because in the bible it says "A man cannot sleep with another man" or something of that sort. So... yeah.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

ah...you have voiced my own philosophy...this bickering...my god is better ...no my god is better...ack! it is senseless...they are all the same One God...no matter what name or image we have of him/her/it

[Victoria Everly]

This is really great! And the colors are great too! Colorful greatness haha.

[Sara Mercury]

This is true. God cannot be created with thought. HE created thought! God is ONE, in three facets, 3 persons. All One Mind and consciousness, yet three people. One God. Try getting your mind around that! It's perfectly logical to me, but confusing to so many. His voice is like thunder, yet it is soft and rich with overpowering Love. When He tells you He loves you, His emotion floods your soul, like no other 'I love you' can! In His presence, you can't help but fall to your face for your own unworthiness before His Purity. I love God, and I know He loves me. If I choose to dwell upon Him for any length of time, I feel peace such as the world can never and will never be able to give.

Great job!

[:DI laugh too much:D]

I loved this so much, and the colors you used were awesome! great job!! =]

[jay-lyse]

What I like about this is that it's so simple and honest. Many people who write anything that has to do with religion they use so much harsh words and the emotion that comes from it is sometimes scary. But with this the flow of the words and the structure makes you wanna keep reading and allowing yourself to be a little more perceptive to a spirit that is so powerful. Great Write!!

[Megan]

"He cannot be attained through silence
Even though meditation is unbroken
Hunger for God is never finished"

This poem is wonderful, and is so true, expressing the truth about God, who is the epitome of truth, love, kindness, and all that is good in the world. And I liked the way you ended it.... "And victory is God's alone."..

on a side note, i love the picture up there. never alone, never unloved.

thank you for the post.

[JanieB]

Very nicely written.

[.shalynn.009.]

"he has same faith" This should be "he has the same faith"

"The pure belong to god.
And Victory is God's alone." Intereseting (and you did this throughout) that you chose to use "god" in the first line, and "God" in the second. I actually like d this technique, and I would even go so far as to say that last line and maybe the first should be the only places you use God as a name. Using god reather than God makes the idea of Him more unversal, including all ideas and theologies. This way, when you use it in the end as a name, the usage becomes far more powerful. But I like this poem. Good job wiht your rendition of a Higher Being without using religion.