God

Help God In Making Earth Beautiful

God is one

and only one

having different names

If you are poor or rich

he has same faith 

he loves all

God is one

and Truth is his name

He is the creator

The Unborn,Undestroyable,Kind  

True in Beginning

True Before time

True in the present

He will be forever true

Thought cannot create him

Even though one may try

He cannot be attained through silence

Even though meditation is unbroken

Hunger for god is never finished

Despite the amount of money or wealth

So many bad things we do

but he always forgives us for our mistakes

either big or small

The pure belong to god.

And Victory is God's alone.

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

AMEN!!! This is a very beautiful peice!! The only thing that I might change is in the 5th stanza and the last , I would capitalize God. It's really not that big of a deal, besides it being kindof a pet peeve, I guess you can say, of mine. But it is a great peice!!

P.s. I'm the creater of a group on Writerscafe called Christian Writer's Club and I try to feature a new Christian peice once a month and I would love to feature it!!! If you're interested check it out!!! I wish I could find a way to insert a hyperlink!! I'm terrible with computers lol.
Anyway, great work!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Its a beautiful and colourful poem!(hey that could go even literaly :-P!)I have never really considerd writing about God i dont think i would do HIM justice,but this poem does!i like it

[Cynthia]

Thats simply BEAUTIFUL! Really, I love how you made the stand in this poem and how you told us the story in this poem!
I love this poem really much, thanks for posting it here and sharing it!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I appreciated the wording, that God is, no matter what name is used for identification. Great poem.

[Rose Masen]

As another said, this was a BEAUTIFUL tribute. It's giving an explanation, almost, to those who might not fully understand, but yearn to understand.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

Beautiful poem...even though I don't agree that 'God is one...having different names'
i respect your opinion and admire the artful way you expressed it :)
thanks for sharing!

[Tommy]

Well writ tribute to God...I have only one suggestion, which is to capitalize God throughout the piece.

Nice Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[trainwreck]

Great poem on God! I really like this poem. I love this, and the statements you make. Victory really is God's alone.

[Richard Williams]

A well-written poem of belief, and simple assertion. The concept of God remains one of entire subjection. Asserting something doesn't make it true. Some interesting lines..."He cannot be attained through silence." How could anyone know this? And what is the "He" that one seeks to attain? God means many different things to many different people, and all is by assertion. The universe is indeed knowable, but not by simple assertion, or by the useless glaze of faith; it is knowable by observation, reason and evidence. God statements are too easy, and say nothing. "And victory is God's alone." That's interesting that God would be in any type of competition, after all, if God is God, why wouldn't he win? "Thought cannot create him." You may want to study a wee bit of human history.

[Marie Harrison]

This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for posting this poem.
It lightened my heart and put a smile in my soul. Thank you.

[Julie Beth]

ok three things, first pretty picture, Second nice colorful lines, third amazing poem outstanding job :)