I Said You Said

This is just a funny conversation between two people:):)

I wanted a friend so I asked you

I already have many friends
so why taking a chance on me

I changed my mind so do you

bye..

wait I am taking a chance on you

I am not a chance by your choice

so let me change this to
your favor ..so let me introduce you as
my best friend..

so fast..

lets see can you do right justice with

my decision..

Hey are you flirting
with me..

No never..you are not
my type..

Tell me about your type..??

He must be understandable ,
loving,handsome,have a long height,a party freak,
short nice hair,respect woman,elders..

(actually laughed).. you seems so funny..

I am not..

okay..

what about you??
at-least she should be funny,
then she laughed..

then all this continues forever..

Author's Note

I think its a funny kind of thing i have written..I think
you all will like it..please review it and rate it..
I will really appreciate it:)
IN BLUE COLOR: I SAID
IN PINK COLOR: SHE SAID

Reviews

[Tom Benson]

I could see what you were aiming at but I'm a bit of a purist when it comes to dialogue ... even in poetry. If you don't mind I have a couple of things that I feel would improve this type of write.
Use one colour for one speaker and a different colour for the other.
Use quotation marks for words spoken.
To emphasise a particular word in a sentence, use italics instead of other colours.

Apart from that, I think it works.

[sudeshna]

it is really funny... but the color did confused me at one point.. otherwise a thumbs up

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

C-U-T-E, cute. CUTE.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

love it! i love your writing! thank you for posting this!

[angelina]

i like it! its something that i never would've thought about writing. its like a conversation within a conversation if you get my meaning with secret undertones.
angelina

[Mauricio Montoya]

Its funny how we see differently depending on gender. Love how you brought this together.
Great job, well done.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Again, this is some nice work. Off the wall, colorful and laugh out loud hilarious.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Great write. Very much entertained our family. Keep writing. Good wishes.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your narrative..Sara

[Pramod]

i like it the differentiation that u made using colors is really nice n i loved the conversation also especially the end is beauteous.

[Raspberry Rebel]

What a write...Very entertaining...Left me smiling.