Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[sweta'karman']

you brought the very initial iota of emotional upheaval when someone very close has come closer and things are getting bungled...very true..

[Little Birdie]

It's true though. Sometimes your own heartbeat is the most calming one. Just listening to it, knowing you're strong, still going on and just being so grateful, so much grateful that you're alive.

[LinBin]

This is a lovely piece of writing showing lots of heart x

[Bridget Mcmaken]

I love this poem, its deep and has a sad story to it. You wrote this well, it makes me cry reading this. I love this poem, I could read this over and over again. Very nice job Thank you for sharing it to me.

[Joshua]

Very nice poetry, such beautiful words.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Hmm I think its really well done, I love the phrase "The most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that hearbeat is for you" its very lovely.

[Demi Rose]

many things can be said about this but it is really amazingly penned!

[Adelia Alighieri]

Great, emotional write :)

[Abd-afeez]

So much wavy, but in a good way. The poem opens our heart to realities we always want to deny and it is a fact that their exist a very thin line between friendship and relationship. Its the depth of nur feelings and the understanding of each other's nature that defines the very thin border. Thanks for sharing.

[unknown]

All relationships/friendships have their ups and downs and it's sad when we think someone did care but they really didn't, and when we thought they didn't care but they really did, ultimately at the end our hearts are still beating whether happy or sad, it's not broken permanently and always gets a chance to love again.