Bologna

Nothing like a giggle for my love

If you were a sandwich

I'd be your baloney

because I don't make much sense anyway

If you were a sheep

I'd be your little bo peep

because you can count on me

If you were a house

I'd be your walls

because I'll stand unsure but tall

If you were a lawn

I'd be your grass

because you can mow me anytime

If you will be my anything

I will be your everything

Just promise not to be nothing

because I'm no big bang

and I can't make something out of nothing

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I think you love baloney and
the guy you wrote this for
You write good
Forevermore
I wanted to write a review, but if you want '
to be silly so can I.
---- Eagle

[AleyshaRosa]

reviews are getting old
really, i'm not sold
we gotta write some silly
to make the nilly's willy
so thank you
for the review

[Tunder]

I love this! It's a cute piece of nonsense! :) Your poems always make me feel something and you are a very talented poet :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thank you, Tunder!
Nonsense is so much fun to write!

[RachelReaper]

haha! this made me smile. has anyone ever told you that you make very little sense sometimes but that its very funny when you put it into writing?

[AleyshaRosa]

Uhmmm... Hmmm.... Lemme think...
Definitely! =P

Thanks, Rachel. =]
Glad I brought a grin to your face

[Adam :P]

haha loved it

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Adam =]
Much appreciated

[X]

This is adorable, and poignant. I like the segments between stanzas, it has a cool effect on the poem in general. A new look at emotions and love- well done!

[AleyshaRosa]

Thank you so much, X =]
Had to drop the heavy for a bit and dance about with the light. =]

[X]

Indeed. If only life would do the same for us.

X

[AleyshaRosa]

No kidding...

[Dark Butterfly]

this is so cute!!

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, DB =]]
That's what my boyfriend said =P

[PP]

The last 3 lines, *fab*!!!

[AleyshaRosa]

I agree!
Haha, thanks Prathama =]

[Faffy]

a very uplifting and cute poem =)

[AleyshaRosa]

That's what my boyfriend said =P

Thanks, Roshan

Decided, hey, let's go against my spiteful words and write a cheesy poem about love. =P I really need some crackers for all this cheese.

[Faffy]

haha =P