Space

A good day to reach for the heavens

I’m more than a bird

Haven’t you heard?

I’m higher than the sky

Can’t you see me fly?

I’m above the fire

Higher, higher, higher…

 

I’m reaching for the moon

Haven’t you seen the doom?

Cursing the below

Swallowing you whole

Come with me

I’ll show you, you’ll see

 

We can be more than birds            

We can be the bright blue

We can drift in space

Just take my hand

And let me take you to that place.

 

 

Reviews

[Tunder]

"We can be more than birds, we can be bright blue" those are my favorite lines because there is a particular allusion to surrealism here that is simply breathtaking! The use of color to describe an emotion or feeling is pure genius! Lovely write!

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Tunder!
I agree, that's one of my favourite verses as well =]

[alan khan]

the second stanza captivated me, put together perfectly. amazing job.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Alan
=]

[zainul]

Wonderful inspiring piece.
It is a great opportunity for anybody to stay with you.

[AleyshaRosa]

Well thanks Zainul =] I sure hope so

[zainul]

You are most welcome,Aleysha.:)

[Dayran]

And away we sail on the wings of the wind ... quite a mood you're in Aleysha. Lifting ... on the spirit.

[AleyshaRosa]

Mmmm indeed...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"We can be more than birds
We can be the bright blue
We can drift in space
Just take my hand
And let me take you to that place."~If I could be anything, I would be a bird and fly...
What a sweet write! I enjoyed this uplifting piece... of course I'll take your hand,Sweetie.. :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Robbie =]
When we meet in the next life, we will be birds