Two Hearts

A tale of two hearts, all intertwined,

two hearts and one soul; we need to rewind!

There once was a boy, and there once was a girl.

Well what should he do? He gave her a whirl.

He had his first taste, and how sweet were those lips!

She wanted his all from that very first kiss!

It didn't last long though, their private affair;

his sweet wife came home and clutched at her hair!

"Oh darling! How could you? I'll take this no more!

She is no me, she's only a w***e!"

The boy made her leave, that wife all in tears.

(Well that marriage is over, I've hoped this for years!)

So now all is well, those hearts intertwined.

Two hearts, yet one soul; and now he's all mine.

Reviews

[MOON]

Love the twist , its fresh you told a story here .

[Allyson Wolfe]

Thank you!

[Soul Fire]

Very well written.A very unexpected twist! I like your twist! Great write!

[Allyson Wolfe]

Thank you!

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome!

[Kyle]

I wasnt expecting THAT ending!! I love the way this one sounds! Very nice....it made me chuckle too.

[Allyson Wolfe]

Thank you much! I like to try and switch things to the unpredictable!

[Kyle]

You are a skilled writer no doubt. :0)

[Allyson Wolfe]

Why thank you!

[zainul]

How you managed the first episode!
The boy made her leave, that wife all in tears.
And hence great victory for you!
"So now all is well, those hearts intertwined.

Two hearts, yet one soul; and now he's all mine."
I can see a tearful departure of a legitimate wife and triumphant entrance of a
new girl in the life of the boy.
Well crafted work of a common event that is being happened all over the world.
Thank you ,Allyson for the lovely piece.

[Allyson Wolfe]

As always Zainul, thank you so much! I feel there are enough poems from the side of tearful wives and jealous husbands that a look into the mind of a triumphant homewrecker would lead to an interesting read. Thanks again!

Allyson

[zainul]

Yea,Allyson,you are very right.
I really enjoyed your piece.
At the same time,I always feel pain in my heart when a woman gets ousted from a happy home by another woman.
"Woman against woman" has become very common curse everywhere!

[Allyson Wolfe]

Oh trust me. I have been the woman ousted. This poem is more of a tribute to me getting a lost love back from that same woman, actually. It's such a horrible curse. (In reality, the "wife all in tears" was merely another girlfriend he had once. Horribly dramatic situation that was. So glad I'm out of it.)

[zainul]

I trust you sweet friend.
I am also happy that you are out of the horrible curse.
I expressed my feeling out of compassion to the victims of such horrible curse.
Enjoy your happy life forever.

[Allyson Wolfe]

Thank you, Zainul. :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,my lovely friend.