Heartbreak

About heartbreak...

When a heart breaks

It shatters

Into a million pieces

Glimmering with hope

Of rejoining

But dull with despair

They seperate

And never do they all return

The whole being is replaced

With a huge ache

Pain

Tears

Sometimes, none ever rejoin

They stay alone

Wandering

Desperate

Other times

They come together again

But they are bound

With falsehood

Desperation

Lies

But at the very best

They join together once again

Bound by love

By joy

By happiness

And become something

Even more beautiful

Than before

Reviews

[Angel Veselinov]

Great work :) Really nice poem. Keep writing :)

[Onyx_Rayne]

Absolutely beautiful and filled with emotion.

The structure is excellent and it lends a great flow to the words.

"Glimmering with hope
Of rejoining
But dull with despair
They seperate" - lovely!

Your talent shines through every word... Fantastic job :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

breathtaking precision in your poetic form to relay the spectacular resiliency of the heart~ beautiful writing~

[PurpleHeadedCrazyNut]

This is an AMAZING job!?
You're 11? WOAH.
'And become something
Even more beautiful
Than before'

I LOVE it.
LOVE LOVE LOVE it
It's STUNNING
a Big thumbs up from me (Y)
xxx