"You"

"You"

A Poem by Dr Ayaz chandio
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me and life will always be agreed on you....! just wrote simply..hope you would like this friends.

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Life asked me "what is your destination"?
I replied very contentedly "you",
when I asked life” what is your destination?"
life smilingly said  "you",
thus I and life have the same destination that is "you".

© 2012 Dr Ayaz chandio


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Very unique and thoughtful. I liked this a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and appreciation dear Najam us saher
Najam Us Saher

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
WOW! the beauty of simplicity. #Totally-inspired

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the review dear.
Simply beautiful =) Lighthearted, lovely, and a bit romantic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
hehe i liked it :)
very creative ;)
keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks dear.
I kind of liked this one too. all good things, N

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear.
:) cute love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

thanks dear....
Hahaha. Happy voyage.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Junert

7 Years Ago

Simplicity is good.
Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

yes l love simplicity..so i never wait for what expert call "perfection! "
Junert

7 Years Ago

Yeah, perfection. Huh.
great poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


An interesting cyclic poem which is thought provoking and somewhat philosophical.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your precious time and inspiring words dear.
A write that made me smile, once again :)
^_^ Thanks for posting d:


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr Ayaz chandio

7 Years Ago

My pleasure,thanks for the review,,,keep smiling.

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Dr Ayaz chandio
Dr Ayaz chandio

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"I am the meaning of your silence,and you are the beauty of my words"(aZ) i love art,literature and nature in all its aspects.. and i have been writing ,since i have been touched by love.I usually .. more..

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